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for I think I better leave right now

by purrfectly679

person Meg
schedule July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, for your first lemon it was WONDERFUL! Heck it was wonderful for a lemon PERIOD. So so sososososososos sexy. VERY sexy.
Super awesome, what on earth is gonna happen!?
person Naruke and Shikamaru
schedule July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Naruke: *blushes and fans herself* Woo wee, that was hot! ^__^
Shikamaru: *stares at the screen* Dude...
Naruke: Please tell me you'll write more chapters like this? Hm?
person ookima
schedule July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
we highly apprecaite it that you posted everything here as well
better be safe than have everything deleted again ne?
keep up the great work!
person Chriku
schedule July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is wwwwwwwwwwwwwoooooooooooooooowwwwwwwww.. f..... HOT!!!!!
Pleas write more!! *begging on my knees*
person VanLuvEr
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HEY WOW i just read all of your story today and let me say that IT KIK ASS i love it toooo death !!! no joka and yeah the whole "if you wanted to get into my pants you could have just asked" WAS SOOOO FREAKIN AWSOME!!! i was lauhging sooo much!! i SO0o0o0o0o0 can't wait till your next chappy! well write alot and update soon! cuz your an awsome writer! PERFECT!!!
person FeatheredEdge
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
whoa! so you didn't fall offa the face of the planet! YAY! So what happened eh? Well no matter what I'm glad yer back around! ff.net is stupid anyway compared to aff.net! hahhaa, encouraged to post all the smutt you want! anyway, as always I love this fic. It's one of my favorite fanfics ever and I really really hope that you finish it off soon!
person hentaiyarou
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*purrs* yum. I especially like how Sasuke was able to withstand the sexy-no-jutsu *smirk*

More, please?
person dfgdfg
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you are a very good writer. but if him and sasuke did do it. dont make naruto a girl, so many ppl do that and its so annoying. if hes gonna do naruto, make him be hif anf and not a ditsy girl. trust me, i've seen many good storries turn stupid because of this.
person Lexy
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking where you're taking this story. Please continue, I love the angst and character change that is building up.
person Jae
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm very much enjoying this fic. Please, I hope this isn't the end. <*does puppy dog eyes*>