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for I think I better leave right now

by purrfectly679

person Majo-chan
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very intresting and different, please continue
person Kashshaptu
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you write really good!^_^ I'm anxiously waiting for the next chapter..just one thing, the formatting didn't come out the right way o_O but go! update!! gimme the next chappie!
person ookima
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it's here! Finally here!
for people who don't know, there's some serious SasuNaru in here! Just in later chapters cuz you know, gotta develop the story, please review, cuz this is one of the best stories ever!
I'll support you all the way !
person Bunnysan
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
weee!! I am so glad you are posting here!! (I was extremely sad when your story disapeared from Fanfiction.net) Yea! I can't wait for more! =)
person Ailetoile
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... The first thing I would like to say is... Where have you been? Those saturday updates were making me so happy, and then you disappeared :( That made me very sad.

The second thing I'd like to say is that there were some things that got messed up when you posted this on aff.net. If you go through and look at the text of your story, there are a lot of very random characters inserted here and there throughout the chapter. I'm assuming that it happened when you ed aed and pasted.

I'm very glad to see you back. I hope that we can finally see the end of your story now :) Please post quickly!