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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.o .....ummmm...that was......interesting........ ^^;; Actually, I thought that it was pretty good. A little confusing, but good. -Very- original, too...I gotta' tell you, that was a first...how did you come up with the idea?
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great work, as always ^^ Really liked the darker aspects of this fic, your other writings are really good too. Hope to get some more soon :D I really REALLY hope that you'll continue Homecoming, it's insanely good :3 Keep up the good work. Good luck with your exams!
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
mmm, good, interesting, nice to know you're still alive ^_^ sasuke's so lucky; naruto AND itachi ^_______^
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
um...man....sasuke in here either has multiple personalities..or he's one...twisted person...
i like the sasunaru fluff...but the itasasu thing..was kinda weird...i'mittlittle confused about that..so did sasuke use his sharingan to make itachi think that happened? .....and..sasuke has his brother locked in the basement?!?!...(does naruto know? cause...i can't see the naruto in this fic agreeing to that...he's so sweet and innocent)
-___-; anyways, it's a pretty good fic for unbetaed stuff...didn't spot anything really really bad in terms of grammar and spelling..or maybe i just ovokedoked it..*laughs*..oh...what exactly is sasulta(sp) or whatever you called it? i can't figure it out for the life of me..
you know...if you took out the whole itachi business....and expanded on sasunaru fluff...it would be a really good fic..i want to see how naruto manages to break sasuke's mask...and maybe...sasuke's reaction to having his house decorated by the girls...wouldn't it be funny...if they got all exotic on him..and turned it into a jungle or something? ^_^
however, i like the idea of the different sasuke's...the above, below, before and after..it's a very interesting way to word it. Shows a lot of self reflection, if sasuke can identify diffferent parts of himself.
blah..sorry..i'm ranting..
thanks for writing!~
i like the sasunaru fluff...but the itasasu thing..was kinda weird...i'mittlittle confused about that..so did sasuke use his sharingan to make itachi think that happened? .....and..sasuke has his brother locked in the basement?!?!...(does naruto know? cause...i can't see the naruto in this fic agreeing to that...he's so sweet and innocent)
-___-; anyways, it's a pretty good fic for unbetaed stuff...didn't spot anything really really bad in terms of grammar and spelling..or maybe i just ovokedoked it..*laughs*..oh...what exactly is sasulta(sp) or whatever you called it? i can't figure it out for the life of me..
you know...if you took out the whole itachi business....and expanded on sasunaru fluff...it would be a really good fic..i want to see how naruto manages to break sasuke's mask...and maybe...sasuke's reaction to having his house decorated by the girls...wouldn't it be funny...if they got all exotic on him..and turned it into a jungle or something? ^_^
however, i like the idea of the different sasuke's...the above, below, before and after..it's a very interesting way to word it. Shows a lot of self reflection, if sasuke can identify diffferent parts of himself.
blah..sorry..i'm ranting..
thanks for writing!~
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting piece this is!!!!
I like this scary, dark, gloomy atmosphere! And the lil fluff to balance the dark side ;p!
The metaphorical construction of this fic is great!!!
Poor Sasuke of below, lost in the dark. And the Sasuke of above who is drawn to the light by Naruto!
The Sasuke of before who had no hope and no other goal but revenge and death vs the Sasuke of now
who has been given a new meaning in life by his Naruto!
Good thing Naruto got Sasuke out of his basement!
I like this scary, dark, gloomy atmosphere! And the lil fluff to balance the dark side ;p!
The metaphorical construction of this fic is great!!!
Poor Sasuke of below, lost in the dark. And the Sasuke of above who is drawn to the light by Naruto!
The Sasuke of before who had no hope and no other goal but revenge and death vs the Sasuke of now
who has been given a new meaning in life by his Naruto!
Good thing Naruto got Sasuke out of his basement!