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May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great fic, but you need to write a a continuation of this story. Have Kyuubi come and visit Konoha and, well I guess you can say "molest" him slightly in front of all of his friends, Sakura, Hinata (she wouldn't be be to happy about that, LOL), Tsunde, ect. Oh, also have Naruto and Sakura dating, now THAT would make the 'Kyuubi molesting Naruto' senerio much funnier.
Now that the praise is over, time for me to do my sacred duty as a reviewer. I found that in quite a few of your chapters, I had to scroll constantly to read the next few words in each line of every paragraph. I found that it was quite an eye-sore sometimes, and it did (from my POV) detract from the overall flow of the story. I would find my reading one sentence, then have to scroll over to read the rest of the words, and THEN have to scroll back, very annoying. (SORRY if that was a bit harsh, just one of my pet peeves, can't really fix those darned pet peeves, ya know? ^-^) Also, I found that sometimes a few of the beginng letters of some of the words were repeated, for example, "Kyu Kyuubi stared at *blank*" Quite a few of those in there.
Anway, I give you a 10/10 for orignality, 8/10 for grammer and font, 9/10 for fun factor, and overall 10/10 despite the grammatical errors, I really love this story a lot, PLEASE write a contiuation. ALSO, PLEASE give Kyuubi back his fuzzy ears, and at LEAST one fuzzy tail! Find some way he regains some of his more demon attributes, Kyuubi just ain't Kyuubi without the fuzzy ears and tail. Could you do that for a fan? Please write a continuation of this story! (If you could use some of my ideas in your fic that would be awesome!)
Your fan,
Ignorant Boy
~"They say ignorance is bliss, hmpf, they don't know the half of it." TM
Quote property of Ignorant Boy, any misuse of this quote will lead to action taken under
the direct authority of the Racoon City Police Department and S.T.A.R.S (Special Tactics and Rescue Services)
Racoon City and S.T.A.R.S don't belong to me.
Now that the praise is over, time for me to do my sacred duty as a reviewer. I found that in quite a few of your chapters, I had to scroll constantly to read the next few words in each line of every paragraph. I found that it was quite an eye-sore sometimes, and it did (from my POV) detract from the overall flow of the story. I would find my reading one sentence, then have to scroll over to read the rest of the words, and THEN have to scroll back, very annoying. (SORRY if that was a bit harsh, just one of my pet peeves, can't really fix those darned pet peeves, ya know? ^-^) Also, I found that sometimes a few of the beginng letters of some of the words were repeated, for example, "Kyu Kyuubi stared at *blank*" Quite a few of those in there.
Anway, I give you a 10/10 for orignality, 8/10 for grammer and font, 9/10 for fun factor, and overall 10/10 despite the grammatical errors, I really love this story a lot, PLEASE write a contiuation. ALSO, PLEASE give Kyuubi back his fuzzy ears, and at LEAST one fuzzy tail! Find some way he regains some of his more demon attributes, Kyuubi just ain't Kyuubi without the fuzzy ears and tail. Could you do that for a fan? Please write a continuation of this story! (If you could use some of my ideas in your fic that would be awesome!)
Your fan,
Ignorant Boy
~"They say ignorance is bliss, hmpf, they don't know the half of it." TM
Quote property of Ignorant Boy, any misuse of this quote will lead to action taken under
the direct authority of the Racoon City Police Department and S.T.A.R.S (Special Tactics and Rescue Services)
Racoon City and S.T.A.R.S don't belong to me.
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
squel squel please I hope you continue with kyuubi snecking into naruto's room and heeheehee.... surprising him with alittle action heeheehee....please pretty please e-mail me if you do!! I will say this *wow* this is number one of the best naruto/kyuubi!!!!!
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO WAY!!! ORANGE?! ok that was AWESOME but oh man what timing, YIKES....that was GREAT:D
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh man that was an AWESOME chapter...oh man that was just GREAT!!!
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really really enjoyed this. Hope you write another Naruto fic in the future.
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful
now do a continuation
now do a continuation
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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LOVE THIS <33
You should so write another oneee like it.
You did a great job on itt ^____^
~shizuou~
You should so write another oneee like it.
You did a great job on itt ^____^
~shizuou~
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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah um...i just read some of the first chapter....but i had to review immediately!!! this fic is so awsome...looking forward to finishing it! Nice storytelling!!!
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February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just have to say I LOVE THIS FIC. I'd love it even more if you wrote a sequal. (did I spell that right? whatever, too little coffee to care) Just an Idea. The darling fox & Naruto are my absolute favorite pairing just about of all time. Right up there with Cloud & Sephiroth. Or Cloud & Just about any male character. Anyway. I love this fic. Fav. Naruto fic on AFF.net. Yep. Thank you so very much for writting it. I'm going to go stalk you name now and see if their are any other good fics.
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January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Weeeeee!Are they in Narnia?Just kidding.I like so far,lots of new stuff.