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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey i really like your fic! you had a really original idea i like-it! damn Mai!!I don't like him loll. Kyuubi and naruto are really funny together i love the way your portraying them! I cant wait to see what will happen next plz update soon! and add more lemons! lolll;)
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. Excellant grammar, pacing and your original characters aren't annoying at all (a difficult feat to attain in fanfiction). Thou do do think you're underestimatinga little bit how tough Sasuke and Naruto are as 12 year olds let alone how tough they'd be as 16. Oh well, it's a very interesting story, I've always thought kyubi/naruto yaoi fics were interesting. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.