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by BeccaAmon

person mabidiso
schedule November 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Can we talk about how freakin' funny that was?! What a time for Sasuke's insecurities to rear their ugly heads! Way to go Naruto - way to ensure that orgasmic haze. I adore this story.
person RavenSilverKat
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you built that up from no lime OR lemon, to a lime, to a lemon. Really kawaii story!
person tandeki
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!!! lol, again i just adore the way you write, i've read all your fics so far now and all i can keep saying MORE!! MORE!! and hurry!
your such a great writer!
person Terry
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is hilarious. Naruto has to be a saint for not beating the heck out of Sasuke for interrupting the moment. Please keep writing.
person blisblop
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope the silly bug bites you again.That was charming.Kudos.
person Nicola
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excuse me. I'll get back to you when I stop giggling idiotically and my mind decides to return from whatever hole it hid in.

N.
person lolo
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Those shorts were just too much fun. I love the way you write, you seem to really enjoy it and it shows. I lover your character interaction what wonderful dynamics. Great job.

lo
person kai.zer
schedule August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i think i laughed the hardest at chapter 3. that one is AWESOME. just because of sasuke's random thoughts and insecurities XD and naruto. despite my dislike of uke!naruto, i adore this one XD because he -knows- what he wants spammit.
person ender
schedule August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic! It is so sweet. My favorite was when they role played, it was great! Please keep going. Thanks!
person Polka Dot
schedule August 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was so wrong, the last one I mean, they were all funny, but damn, that's the wrong question to ask at that particular moment. hEAHHAHHHAAAAAAA