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for A Forbidden Attraction

by LemonGoddess

schedule December 13, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Too bad this seems to be abandoned. It was very enjoyable! I felt terrible for Haku when he was so ashamed at getting caught, but happy for him at what happened after his shower.

person guest215
schedule July 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You are now cursed. You must send this on or you will be killed. Tonight at 12:00am, by Bloody Mary. This is no joke. So don't think you can quickly get out of it and delete it now because Bloody Mary will come to you if you do not send this on. She will slit your throat and your wrists and pull your eyeballs out with a fork. And then hang your dead corpse in your bedroom cupboard or put you under your bed. What's your parents going to do when they find you dead? Won't be funny then, will it? Don't think this is a fake and it's all put on to scare you because your wrong, so very wrong. Want to hear of some of the sad, sad people who lost their lives or have been seriously hurt by this email?

CASE ONE -
Annalise [Surname Removed] :She got this email. Rubbish she thought. She deleted it. And now, Annalise dead.

CASE TWO -
Louise [Surname Removed]: She sent this to only 4 people and when she woke up in the morning her wrists had deep lacerations on each. Luckily there was no pain felt, though she is scarred for life.

CASE THREE -
Thomas [Surname Removed]: He sent this to 5 people. Big mistake. The night Thomas was lying in his bed watching T.V. The clock shows '12:01am'. The T.V misteriously flickered off and Thomas's bedroom lamp flashed on and off several times. It went pitch black, Thomas looked to the left of him and there she was, Bloody Mary standing in white rags. Blood everywhere with a knife in her hand then disappeared. The biggest fright of Thomas's life.

Warning... NEVER look in a mirror and repeat -'Bloody Mary.Bloody Mary.' Bloody Mary... I KILLED YOUR SON' Is it the end for you tonight! YOU ARE NOW CURSED

We strongly advise you to send this email on. It is seriously NO JOKE. We don't want to see another life wasted. ITS YOUR CHOICE... WANNA DIE TONIGHT? If you send this email to...

NO PEOPLE - You're going to die.

1-5 PEOPLE - You're going to either get hurt or get the biggest fright of your life.

5-15 PEOPLE - You will bring your family bad luck and someone close to you will die.

15 -25 OR MORE PEOPLE - You are safe from Bloody Mary
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you get bored in algebra more often. Good job!
person oohshiny
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
heeheeheee......zabuhaku is one o my non-major-character fav pairings!! if your gonna update it, email me when you do! mine address is deannathx@comcast.net
person Anon
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
BRAVO!
*Hand Clap*
BRAVO!
person Nameless Yaoi Fangirl
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this lots. Zabuza is a little OOC, but that's forgivable, it makes it better anyway. I'd always imagined that he'd be a bit different off the battlefield. Anywho, keep this story going, please. You don't usually see beautiful work like this with this pairing.
person Yui
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well its certinatly (damn i cant type) a work of art.lol. i read it awhile ago and im showing this to a friend its a good story. I tried to write my own but its probrobly at the garbage disposal by now. One question... whats gonna happen at the end?what is Zabuza gonna do? i mean is there gonna be another story or something cuz im curious. anyway email me back i still have a few questions for ya!
person Lolichan
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So hot... I love ZabuzaXHaku... Write more <3
person blisblop
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hot,kind.real,hot.
person Edward
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why did you end it there?! This is one of the few good(No. Scratch that. Amazing!) HakuXZabuza fics out there and you stopped there?! *Dies*

Please more!