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October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey...um... super good job!
the storie is a little weird, like the fact that all the males act gay and all... but its still okay.
u should at least put in one sex scene between sakura and gaara, that be so cool.
my only advice is... don't turn gaara into a super gay person like naruto, k?
i like gaara a lot, hes so cool!
well, email about this one little question: are yu a guy, cause if u are... your gay. i mean it. only a gay guy would write something like this. my story is a lot more different (but its on fanfiction.com *its coming soon!*, chec out out after i make it) see ya!
the storie is a little weird, like the fact that all the males act gay and all... but its still okay.
u should at least put in one sex scene between sakura and gaara, that be so cool.
my only advice is... don't turn gaara into a super gay person like naruto, k?
i like gaara a lot, hes so cool!
well, email about this one little question: are yu a guy, cause if u are... your gay. i mean it. only a gay guy would write something like this. my story is a lot more different (but its on fanfiction.com *its coming soon!*, chec out out after i make it) see ya!
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September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please please please Gaara Naruto I would never say no to a Sweet threesome but those two are So Hot together and Neji really needs to loosen up so far he's totaly an ass Oh well love the story so far ^_^ (drool) >_< {sorry can't seem tohelp myself}
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August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, this is interesting. Neji is such a skrew head. I think that Gaara should dump neji and go with naruto. yep yep. *nods* And Gaara would be seme. ^_^ Update soon pweasey. :p
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July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OO.... Gaara/naru and Nenji/Gaara Nicely written lemon. But eh..omg...doing that at school! Cover the childrens eyes! Gimmie some SasuNaru k?
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July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
...'Twas very good. O_O um, more please? lol
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July 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this very muchrealreally like Gaara and i can't wait to see what you do with him. I have one suggestion though if you make your paragraphs spaced out it's easier to read. But other then that I really want to see the next chap to see who caught them. hehe.
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July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
interesting
a bit rushed
but I hope to see how this fics comes to develope itself
so update
a bit rushed
but I hope to see how this fics comes to develope itself
so update