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I think it makes a better oneshot

Ah! Write more! You write the best bj scenes that I've encountered so far for het fics on this site!

aww....
i like it before Sakura went all emo and decided she loved sasuke when sex with kakashi is SOOO much better!!!!!!
regardless it is still fabulous!! you should continue

omg..... kakasaku... best pairing ever.... despite the age diff........ n the whole teacher-student thing........... still though...... lovin it!!!!!!!! plz update!!!!!!

I am absolutely in love with this story. I must have reread it at least four times and still it's still incredible. Please continue writing it!

For starters, I already like the idea of Sakura and Kakashi. Sasuke for me, is a grand A.

The ending on chapter two--she cried on Sasuke's shoulder---a sign of momentary weakness. She would go out and date Sasuke for awhile, but then later figured out, that she is inlove with Kakashi. First time's lasts forever. And for agirl, it means everything, well except maybe not, if you're a ho.

So I would like you to write something along the way of---Kakashi pursuing Sakura and winning her affection. Of course, for Kakashi it started out as lust, but he later figure out that he wants her--for keeps. He is getting old, you know. And as for her, well, she would have to deal and learn how to choose her mate wisely. She's smart, she'll figure it out. Sasuke, on the other hand, would learn the hard way, that looks or beauty won't keep a girl devoted to you. He doesn't give much a hint that he cares for her in the past. And the past *always* comes back to bite you in the ass if you're not too careful enough.

So, there you go! Type away!

~DG

Ok, this update was slightly disappointing... tohugh I'm still anxiously hoping you'd continue! I really see such potiential for a on going fic with lots of chapter. You're writing style rocks and I find Kakashi and Sakura's relationship traci, with Sasuke's return and all. Please... continue owuld you? And if you can, make Kakashi and Sakura together.

Yeah, I like this couple so much... oh the shame that Kaka/Iru overrules them. Damn that couple... grr...

Anyways... yeah. You're story rocks, and I enjoyed reading it. I hope you continue with another chapter. I can't wait to see oyur return... chao!

(Oh and yes... good luck with your wedding, belated wedding congrats? XD)

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Yup. That's all I have to say. CONTINUE!

what happens to kakashi and sakura? i got to know! please update if you can... please? hehe... i'm so pressuring... sorrie.

This is a really good story! You should keep writing!! (That whole Sasuke-cliffie caught me off-guard, and I need to read more!!!)