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by Sephirajo

person Kra
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh update please.... though I find Kakashi and Sakura's pairing alright, I really see such a potiential story for this 2 shots. Continue? I can really see that it'll be good. Oh yes, did I mention I really like your story! No pressure intended.
person bibi_fly
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! Update soon as you can please. Oh yeah, am i too late? Well if I am... good luck on your wedding! Am I late in saying this?... hmm...
person Jir0ya
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh great work. This so far is one of the best fanfiction I've seen. Excellent work, you have great talent!
person Anon
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if you're interested at all, but a third ending to the story (assuming the two routes you thought you could take the story were 1) Sasuke takes Sakura back and Kakashi ends up sad and lonely, and 2) Sakura realises Sasuke isn't what she remembered, or even that he's exactly what she remembered) is to have all three of them end up together. It would be hard to write in a non-PWP way though.
person xxxx
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
for posting chapter three like that, DIE! just DIE!

person namouri
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmm, well. this is what i think wou;d be a good idea to happen. though its only a suggestion. after sakura tells sasuke everything, he forgives her, since he put her through so much pain, and that kinda thing. but moresasuke like. but sakura doesn't thin kshes good enough for him anymore. so sasuke is the one now pursueing her. and kakashi is still guilty over what he did,. but since him and sakura are so distrught, they scome to temptation again, to try and mske the pain go away. maybe in the end, kakashi and sasuke fight or something. or one backs down, depending if kakashi and sakura develope feelings for each other, or just plain use eahc other.
person blueinferno
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww good luck for your wedding! how nice, your lucky lol...and i do love this fic, it gripped me from the start! ;)
person Cim
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was almost choking on air when I found out you updated. And then it was an authors note -_-.... but at least I know that you still care ^^ As for helping you jump start it...er...sorry I leave my own fics to rot let alone be able to help people with their stories. Anyways, congratulations ^^ I hope your wedding goes off without a hitch and you'll be uber happy.
person Setsuna
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH GODDDDDDDDD! WRITE MOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!! OK: so me and my friend made a deal to write a love story fic about the other person and their fave male chara from naruto.... (I have to write one about my friend and Kabuto... she gets the wonderful task of writing about me and Kakashi!) I've been dying to read some M/F action with Kakashi involved--not that I didn't find ones before but those weren't nearly as artfully done as yours! SO I got like 4 chapters of her story sent to her already... and she's been slacking and only did two in the same time I did five ... and this has been doing on over like 6 months! I've been so disappointed and had pent up lusty-wanton-cravings for M/F kakashiness... not that M/M kakashiness isn't great--coz it is but... a girl's got to have something more close to reality to fantisize about! I'll never be in on a hot yaoi threesome-- a random chick in on hot yaoiness?--that just doesn't happen... but being cradled in big strong manly arms like kakashi's described in your story....*dreamy sigh* awwwh see it's easier for me to just put myself in as Sakura then an uke Iruka or something! I had a blast reading it (look how much I already typed!! O.o;;) whee... I'd cry if you didn't continue? For this perverted stranger's sake? @.@ *clings ankle* I'LL DO ANYTHINGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!! .................. *suggestive wink?* XD!!
person Kira-chan
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! This is so good! I can't wait to read more. And I love the second chapter's ending. Ahh, the drama. Ahh the cliffhanger-ish-ness. Ahh what to do for love?

Well, keep up the good work!!<3