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by Sephirajo

person random
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You really should continue this. Even if there aren't as many people reviewing this as you'd like, it shouldn't matter. You should be writing because you love to do it. I try my best to get this message to people, and I hope it helps you out. I look forward to a new chapter soon.
person cc
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i hope u update! i really like this pairing and i can't wait to see what happens between sakura and kakashi!
person carol
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was really good! I do hope you continue this... I thought the plot was good and you write better than most authors I know. I really enjoyed it.
person dark_Angel
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wa....that was awesome....really want to see wht happens next, update soon!!
person ...
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You..need...to...ADD!!!! Simply put ^_^
person blisblop
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am surprised you did not get a good responce to this,very.I was moved by how well you brought them together.Naruto's braless remark,her riding Kakashi's mind while he carried her to his place.Hetro sex is hard for me to read because the girls parts are so unlikely,unsensual ect.This was not your problem the reverse in fact I knew exactly how ,why she felt what she did and was carried along with her.Kakashi was exteremlywell drawn and if I did not like him before I do now.The dream of Sasuke took the tone and complicated things in a clever way.Even so to have what happened at the end of Chap 2,well,it was a very interesting shock.I can't wait to se how you handle this.I'm sure it will be unique and sensual if bitter-sweet.Too much to ask for a three some?i guess that can not be made believeable... Anyway Thank You for your Wickedsweet work.
person iceygaze
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think i quite love this story, probably cos i love the kaka-saku pairing, but also cos it's really really excting (not only for the sex scenes) and i'd like to read the following chap.
anyway, given that, i'm not english mothertongue and i don't know the right way to thank you for this beautiful work, i can say only
thank you
see you
iceygaze
person Angela
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story wonderful ending though. i still wish it didn't happen though. ^__________^

Take care
person Nekio-chan
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eh, you gotta continue. That's a horrible cliff hanger. I need to know what happens!!!!
person lasaire
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sakura's about-face seems awful sudden -- during the day and the following night with Kakashi, she had plenty of chances to reconsider if it wasn't something she truly wanted. I can't help but think she's confused in the aftermath, rather than truly regretting it.

I really liked this piece -- I do hope you continue it.