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for Mountain

by Sephirajo

person h-u-s
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I really like your story alot. It is well written and the sex is hot and intense. It would be interesting to see how they come to terms with what happened.
person jk1239
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Greatest kaka/saku ever. WRITE MORE O_O cuz i'll be stalking this page from now on
person campurr
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
your grasp of the whole encounter was sweet and hot.just amazing.i hope it gets hotter and works out
chris
person campurr
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh,oh,that was so short so f'n great,you do have a way with words.more please, come for me..... arghhh.
chris
person joann
schedule December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you should really continue this piece.. at least one more entry would do.. it could either continue it or end it... either way, update at least once more..
person Wist Star
schedule November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!
another good sakuxkaka story!!! I luv ur story and how inocent she was plucked by her sensei kakashi!! even though sakura was 14 and he is 30 it was wrong but OMFG!!it was still a good story to read!! i just love how u described the emotions that both were feeling and the ooc was also great to add what each was feeling at the time. Keep it up and hope u continue to write more on this story and i want to read what happens next hope ch 3 is on its way!!!
person CandyElly
schedule November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was nice and hot, I can't wait to read more ^^ This is my favourite pairing, and you did a great job at making this fic nice and steamy!
person Anon
schedule October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dang, good ficcie. O_O very good.... =D
person Mr. Pointy
schedule August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm, this fic is sex-cellent.
person dragonflyelj
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
first of I have to say that I love DS's review, LMAO!!!!! Secondly, this is the third time I am trying to post a review for chapter 2, so this may be the reason you did not get a large responce on it, we are all a bunch of lazy asses! So if only for me and DS, youE toE to continue this story! hehe, well here is my review: LOV LOVE this story!!!! I want to read more! Sakura is regretting being with Kakashi and is pouring her out to Sasuke? NOOOOOOOOOOOO Kaka/Saku all the way!!! hehe. I can't wait to see what happens next, I hope Sasuke tells Sakura to go be with Kakashi, or she realizes that it was not peer pressure that made her choose to be with Kakashi, and she is just confused, and she wants to be with him. Sigh poor Kakashi. I'll comfort him. hehe.
Later!
Dragonflyelj