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July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You write really well and this was written well but........I didn't like the ending. I don't approve of real life Lolita stuff eitherbut in this story I figure Sakura shouldn't be appologizing to Sasuke. And maybe Kakashi should feel a little guilty but not that bad, sheesh.
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
grrr aff.net doesn't seem to likeme tonight, it cut off my first review *smacks it with a whiffle bat full fo sand* anyway excellent as always Jo and I think the next chapter should be something like "the aftermath"
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
as always, too lazy to log in... what? why are you all looking at me like that? ^^ >> <<
nywanyway excellent as always Jo and I think you should perhaps add another chapter, something like "the aftermath" heh
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July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A very hot lemon. Will Sakura move on now from Sasuke? Will she fall for Kakashi? Will he fall for her? Or will she find someone else ? A very good read. and a wondereful narative.
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July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*melts*
So good *-* I...I just can't formulate better words right now. So good...I hope for more!
So good *-* I...I just can't formulate better words right now. So good...I hope for more!
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July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, absolutewesowesome. I do like this pairing, but in the past there were too many botched and badly written stories with this pairing. I'm glad someone talented is finally stepping up to bat. I look forward to how these two will grow as their relationship changes. Again, I really luved this first chap. Keep up the good work (or I'll rip out all my hair and suicide lol jk).
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July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, great job!!! Yesterday I only looked at this and i manage to read some of those erotic scenes and it makes me hot!!! In AFF.NET, this is the best Kaka/Saku Lem0n so FAR!! Keep up the good work and UPDATE SOON!!!
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July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was delisciously smutty and well written! Thank you for restoring my faith in quality hentai fiction. ^^ I do hope you continue this piece!
spork, spork!
spork, spork!
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July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The best Sakura-Kakashi fic I've read so far. Good work.
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July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is the first Kakashi/Sakura fic I've read! And I was absolutely blown away. The way mad made this made me giggle at the beginning, fret in the middle, and really like it at the end! I swear I was going as insane as Kakashi, with the whole 'yes' 'no' 'yes' 'no' thing going on! Sakura's characterization seemed to grow, and I'm really glad you had Ino talk some sense into her at the beginning, because otherwise Sakura would have been way ou cha character! Hehe you made me picture Chobits with Sakura wearing that big shirt and Kakashi trying not to look even though his eyes were glued to the flesh!! Mwaha ^___^ awesome story! Kyah! I loved it! Please write MORE because your writing is as amazing as this story! *claps and goes take care of nosebleed*