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OMG! I must say that is the best Kakashi/Sakura lemon I have ever read! Wow, I need a cold shower after that one! hehe.

There is entirely too few het fic's in this site's Naruto section, I am glad you did one of my fav pairings. You know, my best friend just married a man 19 years older than her in earlne, ne, and they have a 14 month old son, and I see nothing wrong with it at all. Although it is notommoommon thing, and less common now than say 100 years ago, it still happens, you can't help who you fall in love with, and as long as both parties are mature, more power to them.

So anyway, I really liked the fic a lot, your use of spelling, grammar and punctuation seemed good. (I did not pay attention to if you kep in in the same tense or not, I was too caught up in the steamy lemon, mwahahahaha!)

I will be watching for further updates on this fic!

Fly

I love your story, and I was so depressed to see that you had only gotten one review. I would have thought that Kakashi and Sakura would be a common pairing as you say, but, there is, i think, only one other story that has this pairing - isn't that depressing? Anyway, I think you make good use of effective dialogue and evocative descriptions. I hope that my review will atone for those losers who can't recognise potential when they see it. I would be more than happy if you would keep it going.

this was sooooooooo good! you have a lot of talent. please continue this. waiting impatiently for the next chapter...

WOW that was intense!!!!! I was so impressed, and it was very tastfully written as well. nice job... please continue.. I am wandering what happens next..

^^ Ahh! Yay! This was really VERY good. I know I already commented in the LJ community, but I just wanted to review again! It was very tastefully written, as already mentioned, and characterization was awesome. I can't wait for more!

Whoa, that was very good. AND it wasn't SasuNaru (I'm getting more than tired of those). The characterization was right on, detail, prose, all of it was top notch. I definitley think you should continue it. Another chapter of the consequences of what happened could be very interesting. Lemons hardly ever have consequences, and this one would make for some excellant drama.

Wow, great story. You even had me blushing and laughing at all the bold and embarrassing things Sakura did. And its great that you didn't make Kakashi take her right away. Its only right that he put up a fight and thought of all the consequences it might bring. Too bad there aren't more Kaka/Saku stories out there. It'd be awesome if you continued this into a multi chapter story. Ja ne for now :D