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Ebisu x Naruto sounds like fun!!
you should do it =D

and another nice pair, would
be Hayate x Naruto!!! >D

well anyway its your decission >.O

I think you should do a threesome between Naruto, Iruka, and Kakashi. I LOVE your story so far! Good descriptions!

OMG, that was a completely awesome idea!!! I loved all three of those!!! d(^-^)b Way to go!!! I think that you should either leave this as it is (as in a fic about Naru-kun getting screwed by his three senseis ^^ ) or take it to a whole other level. And by that I mean get all four of them together for a "party" of sorts. Or have a "reunion" between Naruto and Sasuke (at which time the latter is surprised by Naru-kun's "new behavior".....or maybe Sasu-kun can be the one to teach him that "control" that he needs....hmmm.......) *insert perverted grin here* ^___~ Keep up the good work!!!

Eeeeeeeeeeeeee! ^__^ That was great! Hmmm....the Ebisu/Naruto pairing strikes my intrest...but I agree that it would take some planing.

Poor Naru-chan. *pets him* He doesn't get to be Seme. XD

Absolutly Fantastic!!!
Please continue...
I dunno about him and Ebisu... Ebisu is totally not attractive...

WAI!!! do a FOUR SOME!!! Jiraiya, Iruka, Kakashi, and Naruto... can you imagine the possibilities? But that was so cute and sexy, that was totally awsome concept you have! You have just insired me.THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!

Ok..I know Kabuto isn't really a teacher, but he is older than Naruto..and is an expert at healing technique. ^^; So maybe..perhaps..somehow..you could write a chapter on a Kabuto/Naruto pairing?
Gah...u know that one guy from the exams that had those bandages tied just over his nose? And he had limp spiky black hair and had the clipboard with him? And he was also the one who watched Gaara use that sand eye?
Well..yeah..that'd be pretty hot if you put him and Naruto together. He is a teacher after all...
Anyways! Good story! I read this a long LONG time ago, and I just found it again while searching for Naru/Gaara. You still haven't updated since then! Where are you?!

Rawr.................


I very much injoyed what you wrote, you seem to have talent. Perhaps you need some more details in a few places, but overall good.

There were some parts that were a little unbelieveable but hey, *shrugs* better than what I can do.

KEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP WRITING~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*shakes fist* DO IT.

*thinks*

hrmmm.......idea suggestions......have Naruto molest Sasuke! ^^ And make it as funny as fuck.

I dunno, just throwing something at ya to get you to think.

that was CUTE..I LIKED IT...1st ever Jiriya/Naruto....and it was NICE

that was GREAT...LOL...pinche Jiraya he would...LOL>..that was great...sure why not...LOL...