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October 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Someone wanted Ebisu sensei? Well I have an idea :)
Ebisu is sposed to be a master at teaching the basics right? ;)
Well, you've mentioned Naruto's not very skilled at kissing, so maybe Ebisu could teach him the 'basics' ;)
Very nice! Keep writing!
Btw, I know it's common, but Sasu Naru! PLEASE! I love them :)
Ebisu is sposed to be a master at teaching the basics right? ;)
Well, you've mentioned Naruto's not very skilled at kissing, so maybe Ebisu could teach him the 'basics' ;)
Very nice! Keep writing!
Btw, I know it's common, but Sasu Naru! PLEASE! I love them :)
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August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
All I can is it rocked! I so loved this wicked cool fic! More Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolute hotness! I am loving it all very much! But, things could get repeatitive with just two people, ne? ;) FOURSOME! Jiraiya, Kakashi, Iruka, AND Naruto! All at once! >D Then Naruto could have a chance at being on top, just like he s, hs, hmn? lol
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August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dammit, forgot something...
Like cdkobasiuk said above, this stores hes have a good plot going, despite all the steamy stuff. ;) Maybe something should come back from Naruto's past? Could further along the plot! Then, if Naruto can't get out of the situation, his teachers can save him, which could lead up to the thing I mentioned in my first review?... =D
Like cdkobasiuk said above, this stores hes have a good plot going, despite all the steamy stuff. ;) Maybe something should come back from Naruto's past? Could further along the plot! Then, if Naruto can't get out of the situation, his teachers can save him, which could lead up to the thing I mentioned in my first review?... =D
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August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story, especally The Iruka/Naruto part, and I would like to see one wiht ebisu!
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August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ME!!! I suggested EbisuNaru!!!! Come on..... you know you want to make one!!!!!! Hmmm....... GenmaNaruto then?(errrr.....?)
GaiNaruto (... I mean he gave him that green suit...?) ......?
GaiNaruto (... I mean he gave him that green suit...?) ......?
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August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
suggest pairing??? shikamaru!! or sasuke, or neji!! kiba and shino also can.. but please.. who ever u decide, please dont use lee or gai. really!!
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July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is great,my unchallenged favourite ^^ please write more
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July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Haha, Naruto is so adorable in this! All of his teachers too. o.o Hot dude, very hot!
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July 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Actually the plot beside the sex is kind of interesting. I t I think Naruto should have some time on top too!! Maybe then he can get a little control of his chakra, because he would be 'in control'. I think it would totally counteract his past experiences and eliminate some hang ups. But that is just my opinion.