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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Waii! the pervert in me loves you! i think an kakashi/naruto chapter would be awesome, lol, or you could just throw all of these gorgeous men into one giant naked heap.... *winks*
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hmmm.... yay! maybe kakanaru... then...ummm.... could you make an ebisunaru?????
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!! I love it all. Kakanaru next please!
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!
Next chapter should be KakaNaru, and then you should finish things off nicely with a foursome!
*hugs*
Awesome awesome. I didn't like Jiraiya/Naruto until NOW.
Next chapter should be KakaNaru, and then you should finish things off nicely with a foursome!
*hugs*
Awesome awesome. I didn't like Jiraiya/Naruto until NOW.
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July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I love Jiraiya and there ain't enough fics around with him. A sequel would be cool, I'm curious about the
Iruka/Naruto pairing ^^. Any chance you'll write some more Jiraiya/Naruto as well?
Please please please, this first chapter was perfect. Continue? ^^
Shin--
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July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*blush* yay!!! another jiraiya/naruto here....
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July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*cries out in love* I love this fic!! I was just thinking why no one paired Naruto with Jiraya.. and here, your fic! XD
Nicely written.
Really, it was a hoot! (I love that word. XD)
Please write more!
And make Jiraya kills the bastards that DARED to hour our Naruto-kun!! >:)
Update soon, ne? ^^
Ja ne~
Nicely written.
Really, it was a hoot! (I love that word. XD)
Please write more!
And make Jiraya kills the bastards that DARED to hour our Naruto-kun!! >:)
Update soon, ne? ^^
Ja ne~
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July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well wrtitten grammatically, no spelling errors I could see but...I can stand SOME shota and would have liked this fic more if Naruto had been older, say around 15 or 16. 12 is just way too young for my personal tastes. If you do write a sequel...well hell, your choice, do what you want. ^_^ free country after all no? All I'm stating is my personall opinion and that is the fact I really don't like Iruka/Naruto fics. It's too much like a father sleeping with his son...something is DEFINITELY not my cup of tea. But, if you choose to write it, all power to you hun.
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Wonderful! Such an intriguing couple and concept. ^_^ I would LOVE A NARUIRU SEQUEL!!! Naru/Iru is one of my favriote couples, they are rather canon to.. the there that age difference people fear. ^^() So...More Jiraiya! NaruIru! And....YOSH!!!^_^
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
About that comment on rape: fantasies are fantasies, reality is reality; everyone - at least people with common sense and average intelligenccan can tell the difference. To some extend, I do understand why this person found it important to strike against the st but but I still encourage the writer to carry on. And yes, I'd definitely like to see more Jiraiya on this site as well, he's such a charmer --