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for Teach Me

by Mieren

person LivingDeadGirl
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i really like this fic and a sequel would be nice and i like the parring Iruka/Naruto. keep up the good work!
person Madii
schedule July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Swoon* Ahhh, there isn't enough fanfiction with Jiraiya in it, and this just filled the void in my heart! The sex was well written and VERY sexy! I look foreward to any sequels you may write, especially if they're Iruka/Naruto! There just aren't enough of those in my opinion, most yaocs acs are either Sasuke/Naruto or Kakashi/Iruka. Not that there are anything wrong with those pairings, it's just that variety is the spice of life, ne? Good luck!
person cdkobasiuk
schedule July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That wa a really good fic. I can never get enough Jiraiya. It wa a nice lemon too and your portral of a tormented and then demonic Naruto was very good. I loved your sensitve Jiraiya too. Go ahead and write more. Even more Naruto and Jiraiya would be nice.

cdk
person takky
schedule July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hee, hee. I loved that, especially the end! Great story!!