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October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You've done something that few authors on this site bother with- you actually set up a plausible scenario, good plot, and keep everyone in character! This story is excellent (probably one of the best in this site's Naruto section), and I hope you'll continue.
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September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is cool! I'm not much for Nejisasu/Sasuneji, but you make them work. Cool. I think Naruto shoulda gone with them, though. And when Chidiwa showed up late I was "Oh my god, it's another Kakashi! ...I hope he doesn't pull out a copy of Icha Icha Paradise." *^^* Write more!
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September 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this. I read all 13 chapters in one day. Please hurry and update soon.
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September 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story so much that words completely and utterly fail me. I check it, like, daily for updates. ARGH NEED MORE.
Will write a coherent review someday, I promise. *suffers*
Will write a coherent review someday, I promise. *suffers*
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September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sweet limes. Great story. I want more Naruto.
cdk
cdk
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August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very nice story. the switching pov works rathell ell because of an extra level of consideration between the characters: each action and thought is carefully considered and detailed withoutmingming too tedious. really nice work! the angst, though present, isn't overdone.
in the scene where naruto reveals his own membership at the curse club, i couldn't help imagining all the other people pulling out their own surprise secret curses: hinata's the bearer of the evil bunny demon; kiba's actually akamaru's brother, since half the people in his family are cursed at birth to become dogs; and Shikamaru's got a fat cat demon sealed in his toe. oh, the evil konohllagllage, sacrificing their young in such a way!
in the scene where naruto reveals his own membership at the curse club, i couldn't help imagining all the other people pulling out their own surprise secret curses: hinata's the bearer of the evil bunny demon; kiba's actually akamaru's brother, since half the people in his family are cursed at birth to become dogs; and Shikamaru's got a fat cat demon sealed in his toe. oh, the evil konohllagllage, sacrificing their young in such a way!
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August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
poor naruto-chan his not paired with anyone! I have a request for you: PAIR HIM WITH SHIKA!!! omg they make such a good couple!!...but of course you're not obliged to do that loll ~Ja ne!~
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August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
cool fic i like-it! poor naruto!!! I hope it gets better for him after. update soon
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August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hark! Was that a ShikaNaru moment? GO WITH IT!! GO WITH IT I SAY!! You can never go wrong with ShikaNaru!! NARUTO UKE 4-EVER!!
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August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is very good! I love it! I really like the Sasuke/Neji pairing too....*perverted grin* Anyway, this is really great! I hope to see more soon!