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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was just wondering if you could try writing what Naruto went thru before Kyuubi took a human form, just wondering how creative you can be about it. E-mail me with your answer.
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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was just looking at your reviews, you have 7 or 8 requests for a prequal, please try it.
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(I review as I read.)
I like the short first scene.
Dream? Oh yeah, the title. . . . What? “Impatibratbrat”? What’s that mean? . . . . So this has happened before. . . . I like how I’ve got an idea of what’s going on, but I’m not quite sure. . . . Oh, you got a couple of typos in here. I don’t think it’s intentional or even unintentional. I think the computer went all wiggy when you posted this. The first few letters of a few words sort of stutter and cut the previous word off. I can assume that “Impatibratbrat” was supposed to be “Impatient brat”, “exudchakchakra” was “exuding chakra”, “canicompcompleting” was “canines completing”, and “cl han hand” was “clawed hand”. . . . Nice image of the Kyuubi’s human form. . . . So how come Kyuubi forced Naruto before? . . . . Heh. Kyuubi’s surprised that Naruto’s turned on, eh? Bet that hadn’t happened before. (Oh, and what do you know: I read the next line right after I said that. ^^;) . . . . So if Naruto had been crying before, how come the Kyuubi pushed him? . . . . I wonder why this time is different; if Kyuubi was so ruthless before, why not now? . . . . “amused to see the child writhe [. . .]” How old is Naruto in this? Is he still a child, or is he just a child compared to the demon? I guess it doesn’t really matter. . . . Heh. His dignity won’t allow him to purr in public. Cute. . . . “Same time tomorrow night?” How often does this happen? . . . . I wish you luck in getting top, Naruto. I’m rootin’ for ya.
Sooo, did he not remember quite clearly? It said that “he was wondering how he could have enjoyed being forced.”
Anyway, the story was interesting. I think it could’ve been hotter, though. (*smiles apologetically*)
I like the short first scene.
Dream? Oh yeah, the title. . . . What? “Impatibratbrat”? What’s that mean? . . . . So this has happened before. . . . I like how I’ve got an idea of what’s going on, but I’m not quite sure. . . . Oh, you got a couple of typos in here. I don’t think it’s intentional or even unintentional. I think the computer went all wiggy when you posted this. The first few letters of a few words sort of stutter and cut the previous word off. I can assume that “Impatibratbrat” was supposed to be “Impatient brat”, “exudchakchakra” was “exuding chakra”, “canicompcompleting” was “canines completing”, and “cl han hand” was “clawed hand”. . . . Nice image of the Kyuubi’s human form. . . . So how come Kyuubi forced Naruto before? . . . . Heh. Kyuubi’s surprised that Naruto’s turned on, eh? Bet that hadn’t happened before. (Oh, and what do you know: I read the next line right after I said that. ^^;) . . . . So if Naruto had been crying before, how come the Kyuubi pushed him? . . . . I wonder why this time is different; if Kyuubi was so ruthless before, why not now? . . . . “amused to see the child writhe [. . .]” How old is Naruto in this? Is he still a child, or is he just a child compared to the demon? I guess it doesn’t really matter. . . . Heh. His dignity won’t allow him to purr in public. Cute. . . . “Same time tomorrow night?” How often does this happen? . . . . I wish you luck in getting top, Naruto. I’m rootin’ for ya.
Sooo, did he not remember quite clearly? It said that “he was wondering how he could have enjoyed being forced.”
Anyway, the story was interesting. I think it could’ve been hotter, though. (*smiles apologetically*)
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June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story, hope you continue with it.
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Naruto fucked by actually fox please!
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I LUV Kyuubi/Naruto there should be more fics about them, Anyway this was AWESOME
Maybe you can continue? ^-^
Maybe you can continue? ^-^
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June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hah! Great fic, You should write a a continuation for this one, I don't know what about, but I'm sure you can do it. I liked the lemon, oh, oh! Idea! Idea! You know how Ino does her little mind dive, have her sneak into Naruto's house at night while he is sleeping. Make her curious to see what Naruto dreams about, and can somebody 'Threesome'?! Hah! Anyway, great fic, I hope that you take my idea to heart and write a continuation to "Fox's Dream" and hopefully takeing my idea to heart (That would be so cool >,<)
Keep up the great work my friend!
Ignorant Boy~ "They say Ignorance is bliss, heh, they don't know the half of it."
Keep up the great work my friend!
Ignorant Boy~ "They say Ignorance is bliss, heh, they don't know the half of it."
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice me like you don't see to much of this
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting...I liked it:D NICE:D
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it!! Hey, what if naruto falls for the fox and makes a deal with Kyuubi that would allow him to come out for a day or two with naruto steal there but he can't kill him cause their bond or maybe kyuubi starts to fall for naruto and want to protect him!! *sigh* still thinking sorry anyway I hope you come up with more chapters or sequel or even another story with kyuubi/naruto!!! *giggles*