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for Fox's Dream

by Mieren

person blisblop
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like this alot.The foxes thoughtsare more erotic then rape
person sd`
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Prequel, plz.
person Anonymous
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good! I agee, prequel pleasse!
person dogmatix
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...it wasn't badly written or anything, but... I think Naruto would have been more affected (read: traumatized out of his mind) by forced sex with an evil fox demon, especially since you established that Naruto cried and protested on previous occaisions. Which is why Naruto's relatively calm acceptance of Kyuubi in ~any~ form seems very, very unrealistic and out of character.
The concept behind the story is extremely interesting though, and if you ever write more NarutoxKyuubi I will definitely be reading it. *g*
person Shady
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. Prequel PLEASE.

(Kinky, I know.)
person Shi Tiger
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Reading this again. Love it! The fox is just so cute in human f Shi
person cdkobasiuk
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
An unusual handeling of the Naruto/ Fox relationship. Good writing.

cdk
person takky
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto (doesn't sound sorry at all). But I think he can ma. *s. *snicker* Great job!
person dark vampire
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i really liked it! it was in character and sweet, yet kinda' dark at the same time. you did a really great job!! *glomp* i love it!! *kisses* thank you!!! *huggles*
person LivingDeadGirl
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
interesting fic i rather like it. keep up the good work!