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by phoenixsdark

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schedule May 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a really great story! The plot is interesting and the way you portray the characters is great. I really lol'd at what Gaara did to poor Iruka. Update soon!
schedule April 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you updated.

If you're taking requests, I'd love a Naru/Neji in this. I'm very fond of that pairing honestly. :)

I was very ecstatic to see you updating this one :D
schedule April 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like it...I love it...I want some more of it :)
schedule April 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
AWWW Gaara has a crush. A crush and he didn't even get to see Naruto. :-( Poor Gaara. I really am loving this story. Very well done and I love the plot very nice!! More please soon!
person roro237
schedule April 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yes it was appreciated:) He might be the captured one but he is far from the prisoner. I love that the boys can to his rescue and the soft humming says he is to ^_^
person KuroiHato
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*uncontroable laughter* I did not expect that. I was laughing so hard it hurt!
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you have got to write more! I love this story! It's highly believable while still being new! Quite frankly I have a thing for Kaka/Iruka. How is Orochimaru still alive? Pretty please update soon!?!?
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. I really hope to see more of it in the near future. You have all the characters down to a T and your plot is amazing. Can't wait to read more of this fantastic fic.
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was the funniest thing I've ever read! Pervert!!!! I was laughing so hard!! I love this!! a Kakairuraiya threesome would be very nice... nya! I cant wait to see what's ahead of them... I really want to see what you have planned... really! Two perverted but loyal nin with a prim loyal sensei under their thumb... Go Iruka! Show them who's the master!!!
schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMAO!!! Oh man that was histerical! That'll learn 'em! *snickerfit* I am so glad you updated this story. Definately need more of it. Please update again soon!