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I hope this ends up kakashi/iruka I just can't help myself. I think this is a good story and I plan on following it.

I've never seen this before. I absolutely love it. Just read all five chapters in a row. I have to say I'm going to hold out for Sasuke and Naruto as a pairing because I'm old school like that, but I think I might be willing to continue to read this even if you didn't. (That doesn't mean I don't really, really, really want my boys to get together. OTP and all that nonsense.) Anywho. I'm super excited about this fic, and Iruka is just awesome. I think you've hit him spot on. Strong but not too strong, temperamental, rebellious, smart, and well-loved by all parties XD

I am very nervous and intrigued to find out who is hiding in the bushes. Also, has Jiraiya finished removing all the curses from Naruto and Sasuke (or enough that they could've been out in the woods and return to beat on Jiraiya and Kakashi)? Or is Naruto still bedridden and it was only Sasuke, Neji, and Shikamaru that beat on the two perverts? Some clarification on this point would be appreciated.

With that i wish you many days of happy writing.

Having Iruka be the Wendy to this wonderful tribe of Lost Boys is truly a wonderful idea to bring to fruition. Although picturing Jiraiya as a mischevious flying Peter Pan is quite scary.

I also love that you set Neji free. Pretty baby deserves cuddles all around. Wink.

I really have no suggestions other than...

Good God, KEEP WRITING!!! I can't wait for the next installments.

Actually, I do have one suggestion (which you've probably heard previously like a nonstop mantra) ... THREESOME!!!!

i really hope you'll update this story. it was interesting

wow... what an original plot! good idea. keep up the good work!

wow!!!!!!!
please update soon..............................
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hey could you make it nejixshikamaru sasuxnaru kakaxiru please......

Oooh, I'm liking this a lot, I think a Kakarshi x Iruka pairing wouild be quite nice too, not mention Sasu/Naru(is that one already gonna happn?) I love the story so far it has a great deal of potential and is already quite captivating. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Update! What happens next - who was watching them, why did Kakashi follow them? Is he gonna get with Iruka - I always thought they'd be a cute couple. Will Gaara be in the fic? Is he the watcher? Is Hinata's nasty dad hurt or dead? Is the watcher Hinata?!

hmm...if you're wondering who to pair up with Shino, I guess your best bet is Kiba. and that aside, whoa, I can't believe kakashi has joined the group too! this gets more exciting than ever! and do I sense a possible JiraIru pairing? Or am I just an old pervert?! rofl!

Woohoo! A new chapter! *bounces around the room like a super-ball* Wow, picked up right from the last chapter and kept true to the story after a long hiatus, good job! Hope to see more soon.