rate_review Reviews

NO! Not Ero-Sensei and Iruka!!! Ero-sensei and NEJI!!!!!! ::sqees like the rapid fangirl she is:: They were socute together in this chapter, and you know, Neji does kinda look like a hot chick if you squint juuuuust a little...

Whoo hoo! Another Chappie! Poor Neji! Must've sucked to have that stupid seal on his head. I'm glad Jaraiya and Kakashi removed it. I wonder who's in the bushes watching them. Please update soon. ^_^

wow....this was amazing. good grammar and everything. i love how this is going. i really hope to see more soon. *HUGGLES!* yay for good writing! ^_^ just one thing, wouldn't jiraiya know tsunade well enough that she wouldn't put those seals on naruto and sasuke on purpose, that something was going on? perhaps he knew by shikamaru, but it seemed a little unclear. i dunno, maybe i'm just making a really big fool of myself. so, before i dig myself deeper into this ditch i've dug myself, i'll say matta ne! ^__^ good luck!

Neji escaped!!! Good job! And Kakashi-sensei will be in the middle of the chaos too! Even better. Your story looks so promising and full of plots, I love it!

Hey there. Just wanted to drop you a note... Bless you for a new, fresh concept! Your Jiraiya is bloody perfect, a scoundrel with a heart of gold. It's nice to see him portrayed with more than perversion. His hideyhole from the world whilst writing is a clever device. (I've been contemplating writing a fic, and was planning to use the Forest of Death as a place to drown out chakra signatures.) I'm delighted with you freeing Neji, and thought the chakra battle for his body and soul was brilliant. I love it when an author truly makes use of the ninja jutsus and unique skills of the Naruto characters (it seems an unfortunate rarity, sadly), and will be looking forward to further installments! You've a fan in the UK!

i am so loving this. you have got to hurry and update. There is too much to compliment on and besides the few grammar and spelling mistakes its absolutely perfect at least it is to me...anyhoo, keep it up and update soon.

It is very different from the normal Naurto fanfic. I just love it. I am curious to see how it all plays out.

this is a really good fic i'm really enjoying reading it so keep up the great work and update soon

I've only just started reading the various Naruto fanfics, and this one was lovely so far. I do hope that you go back to it one day, I'd like to see how it progresses. Jiraiya/Iruka, though, yikes!

This story has caught my attention. I'm liking it already. =) I can't wait to read more. Update soon please.^_^ Can you email me when you update, please. ;)