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there is *some* Shino yaoi - usually he's paired with Kiba. I have a doujinshi of that pairing, you can download it if you like: http://www.zettai-hentai.net/doujinshi/naruto/index.html#natsukoso . Nice job with the story, keep up the good work!

Sweet! X3 continue! continue! As for Shino parings, I've only ever seen him with Kiba or Naruto. ^^;

((When they were checking for new chapters in their favorite fanfics...))
Lina and Excell: ::stands up, pushes chairs back, slams hands on table, and takes a very loud gasp in 2 seconds, sincrenized::

Lina: ::cries in happieness:: Updates are beautiful...!!!

Excell: Finnaly! I thought it was going to become a one-shot/abandoned fic!

((After reading))

L: Did you really have to make Shikamaru-sama the spy?

E: Atleast the living eye-brow didn't go-

L: DO NOT INSULT THE GREAT LEE-SAMA!!!! ::kills Excell::

Momigi: Since they are having a lovers quarrel (Excell in backroung: WE ARE NOT LOVERS!), I, Momigi Ikaido, will do the rest of the review, since I read it over their shoulders. ^^

Smart Moves:
1. How Shkamaru made his entrence. The shadow trap.
2. Shikamaru as a spy. They wouldn't suspect him. ( Sorry, Shika-babi.. No one -- ever -- suspects you, hun.. | E&L in backround: ::pauses from strangeling each other:: Shika-babi?? Hun?? | M: Shuddup! ><# )
3. Shino's bug. It'd be good for Tsunade-baba to know where they are.

Bad Moves:
1. How you have the times that Shika-babi reports change. It may confuse readers, ya'know..

Paring Suggestions ( uke to seme ):
1. Naruto X Sauske
2. Neji X Shikamaru ( What? Don't look at me like that! )
3. Iruka X iya iya ( L&E in backround: ::trys to make a leap for the keyboard as gravity turns back on on them:: ::2 unplesent thuwmps heard in the backround:: NOOOOO-owwwwwww... | M: ::shrugs and continues typing:: )

Other Pairings ( uke to seme ):
1. Naruto X Neji
2. Sasuke X Neji
3. Shikamaru X Sasuke
4. Naruto X Shikamaru
5. Naruto X Iruka
6. Naruto X Jaraiya ( Wow. Naruto has alot of poeple on his ass... )

L: ::sitting on Excell indian-style:: Momigi, I will seriously hurt you if its your fault if the perfict pair of Naruto X Sasuke doesn't make it..

E: ::doesn't care that Lina is on her and is still spread out like she was in the middle of making a snow-angel:: *sigh* ::rubs now soar throat:: Lina, you have a good grasp...

L: Excell... shuddup.

M: Anyway, good luck, I hope you dont get writer's block, and get to writing the next chapter when you can.

All: Bai Bai! ^^

Wai! PLEASE continue this story, and hurry fast! ^__^ I really like your premise, and I hope you can pull it off!

Shino.... who WOULD you pair him up with?...... Um, *moves to avoid rocks* Kankuro? Yeah... he's all I can think of atdratdrop*

Well....the Muses have this habit of writing lots and lots of PWPs after something with heavy plot. Now, after reading the manga, I keep seeing Kiba with Kankuro...but maybe I could get Shin tin there too. Stupid Muses. They keep cackling about Jiraiya and Iruka.....anyone object to a PWP with those two? Going to add one more person to the run away list. And Garaa and Lee are going to appear....those two are so much fun. Sigh....I'm nuts. But part 3 is under way. Get ready for a bumpy ride. ;)

Iruka Jiraiya? Wow that would be interesting. Keep on writing this one it's hella good so far and it's onl the first chapter!

Freaking good. I can't wait for the next installment! Jiraiya Iruka owo~!? Hee hee, interesting :D though, I've always been a Kaka/Iru fan myself X3. Hee hee hee! Update sooon!

shikamaru and gaara or itachi!!!!!!
and no girl please >_<
and if you can kill sakura... :p

Nice fic, hope you will udapte soon

my god! this fic is really interesting.
for the couple make a nejixnaruto or a threesome nejixsasukexnaruto onegaiiiiiii!!!

Oh, ps... perhaps you should have.... mmm.... Lee and.... Kakashi (since I'm sure Kakashi would be worried about both Naruto and Sasuke...)..? Or Lee and Shikamaru....?