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July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a nice stoy to see .Very different from the norm I hope you countinue it and that is is very long.
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July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Please continue soon! How could they think of doing that to Sasuke and Naruto!? Im glad they are getting away!
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July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Tsunade is very OOC.. so so very OOC... o_o; But other than that, it's good. ^^ As for pairings, I vote Naruto being uke and Neji and Sasuke pinning after him, ending with Sasunaru. ^^; It's my fav pair, so... ^^;;;
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July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah! How could she?!
Very interesting so far :) Well I have one suggestion for your other ninja's, how about Gaara (loves him) With his past and present situation I can see him with our merry band of runaways and not making it to far fetched.
Jiraiya and Iruka pairing you say? XD I'll like to see how you pull that one off. If you do decide to add Gaara, a gaaraXnaruto pairing is always nice ^_^ Though sasukeXnaruto is good to. Well it your choice
I'll be looking forward to your future updates
Very interesting so far :) Well I have one suggestion for your other ninja's, how about Gaara (loves him) With his past and present situation I can see him with our merry band of runaways and not making it to far fetched.
Jiraiya and Iruka pairing you say? XD I'll like to see how you pull that one off. If you do decide to add Gaara, a gaaraXnaruto pairing is always nice ^_^ Though sasukeXnaruto is good to. Well it your choice
I'll be looking forward to your future updates
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July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please hurry and update!!!!!!!!!!!!
NOW YOUV'E GOT MY ATTENTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This sounds like it's gonna rock!
*Give the puppy face and a boyish smile*
I'm so interested in this fic!!! I can't wait to find out what happens!!!
NOW YOUV'E GOT MY ATTENTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This sounds like it's gonna rock!
*Give the puppy face and a boyish smile*
I'm so interested in this fic!!! I can't wait to find out what happens!!!
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July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that was really something! Not many fan are are interesting enough to even remember the title, but this one's going to stay with me for a long time. ^^
I absolutely loved the plot. It was so original! No more of that " Lik Like, Naruto and his frends are in hi skool and their t out outkasts and every1 hates them! What r they gonna do?!" junk. Or the "Character1 decides to leave and Cha Chaer 2er 2 is realising their feelings for C1, what will C2 do now?".
THANK YOU. I've been sifting through junk fic after junk fic, and the lack of originality is traumatizing. But here, I click on the link for 'Missing' and what do I get? An original fanfic!! I almost died from the shock of it all. Thank you SO much for actually taking your time to consider that itty bitty detail called Plot.
It was also really nice how you didn't have a huge, two page author's note at the top of the page, or bottom. You got straight to the fanfic, which I greatly appreciated.
Furthermore, your writing style is absolutely fantastic. You don't throw in random Japanese words just to make yourself sound smarter, your sense of timing and flow is impeccable, and the characters are believable. The only exception I saw to that was Tsunade: From what we've seen in the manga and anime, she seems (to me) the type who really respects individuals, and values the human life. I can't really imagine her ever doing this sort of thing. Perhaps she was forced into doing it by a council, or the villagers? It's absolutely necessary that the decission be made (for that annoying detail, plot), yes, but I can't see Tsunade being the person who did it. But I'm no fanfiction writer, so what do I know? ^^ I l I loved seeing this side of Jiraiya. It's nice to be reminded that, although he's kinda goofy, and he acts like a perverted old man a lot, he is still one of the three legendary ninjas, and he does have that serious side to him.
I'll wrap this up (before I get carried away pointing oul thl the great aspects of your fanfic) by saying that I really enjoyed this story, and have got my fingers crossed for a sequel. (Hopefully soon! ^^) Please do get get discouraged by anything nasty homophobes, stuck up copycats, or preteen fangirls say. You're story was an absolute delight to read, and I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter. (Not that that means much, but hey. ^^;) My two requests? Get the next chapter out as soon as you can comfortably do so, and don't be persuaded by any ranting reviewers to change your pairings, storyline, writing style, or anything else that they might try to persuade you to change. I have absolute faith in you, our guide through this story, and I know that you'll do everything for a purpose, not just to please reviewers.
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter,
-Atarii (aim ichigokumaguro)
I absolutely loved the plot. It was so original! No more of that " Lik Like, Naruto and his frends are in hi skool and their t out outkasts and every1 hates them! What r they gonna do?!" junk. Or the "Character1 decides to leave and Cha Chaer 2er 2 is realising their feelings for C1, what will C2 do now?".
THANK YOU. I've been sifting through junk fic after junk fic, and the lack of originality is traumatizing. But here, I click on the link for 'Missing' and what do I get? An original fanfic!! I almost died from the shock of it all. Thank you SO much for actually taking your time to consider that itty bitty detail called Plot.
It was also really nice how you didn't have a huge, two page author's note at the top of the page, or bottom. You got straight to the fanfic, which I greatly appreciated.
Furthermore, your writing style is absolutely fantastic. You don't throw in random Japanese words just to make yourself sound smarter, your sense of timing and flow is impeccable, and the characters are believable. The only exception I saw to that was Tsunade: From what we've seen in the manga and anime, she seems (to me) the type who really respects individuals, and values the human life. I can't really imagine her ever doing this sort of thing. Perhaps she was forced into doing it by a council, or the villagers? It's absolutely necessary that the decission be made (for that annoying detail, plot), yes, but I can't see Tsunade being the person who did it. But I'm no fanfiction writer, so what do I know? ^^ I l I loved seeing this side of Jiraiya. It's nice to be reminded that, although he's kinda goofy, and he acts like a perverted old man a lot, he is still one of the three legendary ninjas, and he does have that serious side to him.
I'll wrap this up (before I get carried away pointing oul thl the great aspects of your fanfic) by saying that I really enjoyed this story, and have got my fingers crossed for a sequel. (Hopefully soon! ^^) Please do get get discouraged by anything nasty homophobes, stuck up copycats, or preteen fangirls say. You're story was an absolute delight to read, and I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter. (Not that that means much, but hey. ^^;) My two requests? Get the next chapter out as soon as you can comfortably do so, and don't be persuaded by any ranting reviewers to change your pairings, storyline, writing style, or anything else that they might try to persuade you to change. I have absolute faith in you, our guide through this story, and I know that you'll do everything for a purpose, not just to please reviewers.
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter,
-Atarii (aim ichigokumaguro)
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July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOoooh, very interesting! I like how the plot is set up. I'd prefer Sasuke/Naruto pairing^^
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July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
frankly this is very good *luvs* I never expected the story to be like throm rom the summary ^^;
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July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is looking good. I haven't read anything quite like this. I can't wait for more.
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July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*applaudes* This is a whole new twist that i never thought of as to what could have happened after Naruto, Neji, Shikamaru, Kiba, Chouji, Lee, Gaara, Temari and Kankuro (they all deserve praise hence why i named each individual) brought Sasuke back. This fic is unique, original and most certainly compelling. I look forward to reading the rest of your fic, that is if you're going to update it.
Two more ninjas? I wouldn't suggest Ino or Sakura 'cause they would just insist on going just to stay with Sasuke. Tenten is a maybe as is Shikamaru. Both would be useful in the future but they would be reluctant to leave Konoha. Kiba, Shino ahoujhouji seem like the type of people who would help the others with their getaway.
Truthfully, i can think of three ninjas who would go along with this band of merry men. Hinata, Lee and Kakashi.
Um...if it's ok wiith you would you consider making this yaoi? Cheers.
Two more ninjas? I wouldn't suggest Ino or Sakura 'cause they would just insist on going just to stay with Sasuke. Tenten is a maybe as is Shikamaru. Both would be useful in the future but they would be reluctant to leave Konoha. Kiba, Shino ahoujhouji seem like the type of people who would help the others with their getaway.
Truthfully, i can think of three ninjas who would go along with this band of merry men. Hinata, Lee and Kakashi.
Um...if it's ok wiith you would you consider making this yaoi? Cheers.