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Jiraiya with Iruka? Interesting. I think your idea might just work though I still like to see some loving between Iruka and Naruto!!

Love the story, btw. ^O^

Hey, Interesting story. While I disagree with your characterization of Tsunade, I really like the start of this fic. Could you perhaps be persuaded to post on fanfiction.net as well, just without the lemons? It's just that this fic is really good, but aff.net is kind of unreliable. l
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Update soon! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. As to the other two joining, could they perhaps be Gaara and Haku?

P.S. as far as pairings go, I love SasuNaru. So I vote for SasuNaru and NeijiGaara or NeijiHaku (If he's alive).

I am afraid of an Jiraiya Iruka pairing. there almost 30 years apart.
as for pairings, I suggest a triangle betwNejiNeji Naruto and Sasuke (neji and sasuke both liknarunaruto).
How about Gaara for another ninja?

Dude, this is...this is totally kick ass! Awesomely well written, a horribly plausible scenario, and wonderful characterization. I love how well put together this chapter is. Please say there is going to be a lot more of this story because, damn is it good.

Well if you are asking for two more people to join I would say haku and zabiu

Hi!!! *huggles* I am so excited to see more from you! Hehehe, at one point I was thinking about the mission impossible theme, because I was like *make it, damn it, make it XD!! I find the plot interesting. I like the fact that Jiraiya is breaking the rules as usual and taking the boys with him, I doubt Sasuke wants to be bred like a horse, Naruto wants to be half asleep all his life and Neji stay a caged bird. Ohh your pairing is evil Iruka and Jiraiya...

I am wondering who you have in mind to join them...Shikamaru? Kiba? Shino (oh my goth, that would be so cool, he is way underepresented in fanfics!)

I can't wait to read more!
Alma

AH! How could Tsunade do that ;o; I'm glad Jiraiya was there to make everything...semi-oki again lol I think this and i hope to see more soon! Do you think you can put in SasuNaru *shifty eyes, shifty eyes* o___o; sorry I just love the pairing but its your fic! *thumbs up Gai/Lee style* xD

Hello. :) This seems like it will be an interesting story! And a original plot, too. ^^ Well, my favourite pairing is SasuNaru. To me, they seem like the most believable and compatible pair of the series.. (although, of course, Sasuke will probably end up with Sakura... blah. -.-;) But Neji x Naruto is somewhat interesting, too. Maybe a love triangle? ^^ Both Sasuke and Neji interested in Naruto? Yeah.. it's probably overdone, but I still find it entertaining, anyway. :p But if nothing else, I opt for SasuNaru. :) And... Iruka x Jiraiya? o.o;; Wow.. that really is a new one. I can't really see it, but I'm all for it if you can make it work.. ^^