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by shaolin00

person Josh
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice story but you jumped ahead that I don't know if they were at the restaurant or at one of there apartments hope you update this and then make some changes so we understand this story a bit better
person Kakashi
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sooooo Hot. That was awesome. Continue. Dammit...Hotness....Hooottness.....
person Just another fan
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude. that was f***ing hot. write some more KakaAnko fics like this one!!
person ...
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was rather short, but pretty good for what was there. A little more plot might have been nice.
person Mr. Pointy
schedule August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The story is too short. Nice idea for a lemon though.