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March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit, I really enjoy this story. It's got a nice humor to it, and is a very fun read : ) The premise is highly original, if lacking in plot, and my only complaint is that clothing/body descriptions are a bit confusing, they seem to be a bit jumbled. Other than that small complaint, I think this is a great fic. Keep up the good work : )
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I read this story on Livejournal at the konohasfinest community and I've got to say it's really inspired me to get back into writing again! If you don't mind (and you won't come after me on AFF or LJ for this) I'd like to borrow the striptease contest idea and warp it together with my sick little mind and a few OCs from myself and my friends. If you do have a problem with it, I will post it on my friends-only journal and not publish it on AFF.net. Please get back to me! And again, I absolutely LOVE this fic! It's genius!
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! O_O..... this was written so welll.......... waiting for you to update.... hope you od soon!! =D
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I never seen something like that before. It isn't a striptease more of a sex tease. I hope Naruto and Hinata stays together. Kiba is like a brother to her if you look at it and how he is around her. Naruto is the one she is destined to be with in the end. Hope to see an update soon.
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That...was evil of you! Man what a cliffhanger! I wanted to see it all the way dude! Don't do that! I love this chapter! Woohoo! HOT!
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I read this chapter again...DAMN IT! I can't get enough of it! This is really hot...
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok. u REALLY need to get chap three out. too little tenten stuff on affnet~
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG you are AWESOME! your a fantastic writer! omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg!! i ADMIRE you!! LMAO ur..ur..words cant describe how good u r! *fans self* youve got to update SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!! the characters r SO in character!! by the time im finished reading al ur fics..il have no places left in my recommened reading! *wink* ur hot stuff!
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April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update@
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February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When's the third chapter going to come out?