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Just a quick note to thank you for updating.......keep up the good work, and as always, update ASAP!!! Ja ne!!!

Yes, this is my first reveiw of this story, I think. I'm sorry, I should have done this earlier.

This is a great fic. It's fabulous! You got the charcters to work great, the OC's mesh great with the other characters, and it's a great story that makes you want to know what's gonna happen next. Keep up the good work, I am following, and I really want to know how this is going to come about.

Other then that I think this might interest you. I know of a song that really goes with the mood of the story. You'll have to find the music on your own cause I'm no good for finding music on-line. But here's the song and the lyrics.

Artist: Evanescence
Title: Haunted
Album: Fallen
Track: 5

Long lost words whisper slowly to me
Still can't find what keeps me here
When all this time I've been so hollow inside
I know you're still there

Watching me wanting me
I can feel you pull me down
Fearing you loving you
I won't let you pull me down

Hunting you I can smell - Alive
Your heart pounding in my head

Watching me wanting me
I can feel you pull me down
Saving me raping me
Watching me

I think you ought to listen to it, the music really brings the song to life and I think it goes just way too well with your fic. "My Immortal" would also kinda go but I think this song really hits it home.

:: sighs :: Phew, I've been dying to tell you that for about two weeks now, I finally did it! Good luck with your next chapters, and don't worry about your last chapter. I'm of the personal opinion that it's one of the best you've written so far!
Take care!
Midori

OMG!!! This fic ROCKS!!! *starts to squeel like a possessed fan-girl* ...okay, no, wait....the squeeling is taking it a -bit- too far...but still...... ^^;; *starts bouncing up and down* Oh! I just can't -wait- to find out what happens!!!!!!!!!!! How did you come up with such an awesome idea??? And I love the way you have written it, too!!! And the way the characters are portrayed!!! And the descriptions!!! And the details!!! And-- *gets hit over the head with a huge chocolate bar* @__@ *smell of chocolate in nearby proximity revives her* Oh! That reminds me!!! Here: *hands you a box of chocolates* This is for you!!! Why??? Because a) I LOVE YOUR FIC SOOOOO MUCH!!!! *ahem...sorry... ^^;;* and b) it is a well known fact that chocolate helps creativity.....oh, and it's a damn good bribe, too!!! ^___~ Keep up the good work, and update ASAP!!! Ja ne!!!!!! *faints from over-exertion* ^^;;

oh, i just love uchihachest! update soon! i'm waiting for this fic impatiently!! hehe... hey, by the way, which country do ya come from? mail me in lexy_thief_zatga@yahoo.com, please... or if you join friendster, you can mail me there!
I HATE SasuNaru!! Sasuke is UKE! I hate Sasuke seme! He's too cute for that..
Sorry if my English bad.. I learnt it since three years and a half ago... T_T
UPDATE SOON!! This is my fav. fanfic!!

Where is Itachi??? I'm going to kill him!! That bastard!!
Well, I love, I'm crazy about your fic!! I love Itachi/Sasuke!! That's the best pairing, after the Kakashi/Sasuke!!^^ Sasuke the Uke!!^^

Good job!!

I still do not get why eveyone is so sure of what went on during the massacre.I am not saying Itachi is sane but I have my doubts about the clan ..oh wellThe interaction between Neji and his opponent was a striking contrast to Sasuke and his opponants( i am including himself here) he was attacked from all angles, even through time.It was painfully beautiful (if at times the few mangled words ect. gave one pause..but how much of that was the site?) and I almost screamed when you cut the brothers interaction so short after building it up so methodicly.Let Sassuke have his brother at least for a while in the rain.I am gonna be very let down if Itashi turns tease ,why can he not give Sasuke a good memory of him to hold inside ? would this not purhaps further his goal to be killed by a stronger Sasuke if his younger brother does it with a more complex set of responces perhaps out of understanding of mercy of love of insanity?.Does he not have the power to give Sasuke A place of respite in his head where he can go to be with a warm memory or even a 24 hour wheel eye trip to the core ,to skin ,to a place where small deaths streach to eternity (purrhaps when Sasuke least expects it).In other words I want Itachi to negate some of his lack of attentions to his brother in a physical fashion that does not destroy the boy but makes him stronger if more self aware, on a more base note if he blows his mind amongst other things will he not be a ghost standing between Sasuke (who" belongs "to Itachi) and anyone else who attracts him sensually.It would be Twisted but ...it would make this Yoai intensly fufilling.Again it was a real treat to read. Thank you.

God... I LOVE YOU for updating your fic! Haven't read the new chapter but this really made my day... Will review the chapter after reading it ^^

I LOVE your story ^^

uh.... wow.... just... wow. yeah... update fast!

*read the chapter*

God... and now you almost made me cry. The scene with Sasuke and Itachi was just... beautiful...
Even though it was also a little bit sad *sniffles*

But the end... ;__; Nooo... not again...
Itachi left him again....! Argh! *kicks him*

If you would've ended this FF with this chapter I would've protested... really!
Ah well... pleeease... just write more!

wooo hoo you updated ^^ the last chap was soooooo beautifull meh you have sooooooo much talent !!! keep it up please please pretty please update soon ne more itachi x sasuke ne ^.~

your #1 fan!