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for First kiss... and so much more

by Rikona

schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lovely ^^
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwww........that was sweet....and hott.....and wow.....i'm not usually an IruNaru fan....i mean its not the Shouta that squicks me for sure.....but i dunno...but this was good....it seemed.....i dunno....right?? i guess.....ha ha i'm not really awake....but this was really really good
person TkCorvis
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
FABULOUS! I love it! =)
person shawna
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was really hot because there are not alot of iruka and naruto fics. but there were a few spelling mistakes but other then that it was real good.
person AcaciaJules
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There are so few IruNaru fics out there, and to find one written with such great talent is such a treat. It was pure pleause reading this. I beg of you to write another.
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was nice. Naruto is so cute. I'm glad he found someone to love him.
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*blinks* That was your first lemon.... Damn that was good! So much better than my first. ^^ Liked it very much!

LemonKitty
person Lolichan
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So hot!! :) There should be more Iruka and Naruto fics!!
person sunhawk
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not too bad but lube! Lotsa, lotsa lube. That's all I have to say. Otherwise reading about anal sex makes me wince. Nice characterazation of the two. They're cute together.
person Ish-chan
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay!!!!! an irunaru!!!!! GO author-sama!!!! You ROCK!!!!!