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for First kiss... and so much more

by Rikona

person Washu
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If this was your first lemon I can't wait to see what you write in the future. I'm not usually a shota fan, but, well... what a good way to end an otherwise unpleasant day! Especially since it's raining here. Oh, wicked thoughts. Are you thinking of writing more for this story, or just in general? Either way, you should definately write more lemons, especially yaoi Naruto lemons!
person Shez
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No offense meant, but Shez must be bored if Shez read this. Shez is 100% a Sasunaru shipper, so for me to read anything else is very out of character. But it was good. ^^ In a could-never-happen-but-seems-IC-enough-if-it-did way. Do you think you could write a Sasunaru one next time? Onegai? *puppy eyes*
person siw-wa
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Iruka no Hentai! And I thought you were the responsible adult! So do you plan to corrupt my little Naruto more, soon? Please?
person Nova
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's so cute!:D Little fast, but cute:) And the lemon was nice:)
person cdkobasiuk
schedule August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So very hot and nicely written.

cdk