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for Village Of Hentai

by hokuten

schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good history
person fluffy-kins
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU NEED WRITE NEXT CHAPTER RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!!!!! If you lost your tast for lemon at least finish story. this is one of the best naruto fanfics i have ever read (not that i would know much). anyway
YOU RIGHT FUCKING MORE OR ELSE!!!!!
person Anon
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
finishthis goddamed stroy damit. this was the first thing iread on the site a year ago. you had time to finish now do it gerrrrrrrrrr.
person toet
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
are you going to finish this story or not? i really want to know what happens next. narusaku \o/
person Anon
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man this is kick ass I'm at a loss for words good work! (the NaruSaku part was the best I have ever seen and that is NO joke)
person black
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know I'm pretty sure spell check isn't all that hard to use. Other than a few cheesy lines, some weird sex moments, this was really good. Better than all that flippen yaoi all over the place.
person Snapesita
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase Gaara/Hinata!!Please please please!!!!¡_¡
person anonymous
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok heres a few tips. (1) stop writting the same l sce scene over and over again you know the whole bitting her finger to keep from loosing control and then screaming cum with me it gets annoying after eight chapters. (2) ignore the calls for sasuxnaru ok their are plenty of those out there. (3) can you make a : temari x shikamaru fic or gaara x hinata or naruto x temari (hey its a rare pairing it could work) or Kakashi x kurenai. if you do one of these lemons in your next chapter i would appreciate it. this isnt a flme okay its just the first thinat gat got annoying okay. keep up the good work.
person anonymous
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ignore every yaoi they demand okay their are plenty of them in this site. we dont need another
person Snapesita
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Pleaseeee....a Gaara/Hinata fic, please, pretty please!!T.T