rate_review Reviews

awww that was so sexy and i cried a little at the end. really good story

Wonderful story but I'm kind of confused. The scene with Naruto dying, was that just a dream to get Iruka to confess love? Please email me the answer. Other then that it was amazing though you do need to proofread a little. Teacher and student relationships are H-O-T, HOT! There are not many stories with this coupling.

interesting...how old is Naruto...I know you just mentioned that he's a teenager...oh well...can't wait to see how this will develop:d

COOL.,..that was nice...great chapter

I've read a fic where Kakashi kinda forced himself on Naruto but not to that extent...YIKES

OMG...you should definatly warn someone when you are gonna do that...GEEZ...you had me freaking out for a bit there...I'm so GLAD that was just a really bad Nightmare but if he's dreaming of stuff like that is Kakashi capable of that??? can't wait to see what you will do next to them....

*re-reads the last part of Chapter 4*
Ohhhh I think I get it was it a dream?

Ooh, I liked the story, but I was disappointed that we never got any Sasuke X Kakashi!!! (When I start posting, you'll notice I'm very big on rape, bondage, and kakasasu). The last one was a bit confusing though- it wasn't clear if Iruka actually stabbed himself, and it's very disorienting when Naruto is holding him, because you never mentioned he untied him. Maybe if you mention something like "He untied him and held him in his arms"...? The first chapter was great and I really liked the third, but then I am a sick fuck. Very good pacing with the chapters, and it's interesting how you made Kakashi the bad guy- it's an unusual twist on the popular kakairu combo to make them ex-lovers on bad terms.

Can you write something with Sasuke and Kakashi? Please??????? XD

Making all that into a dream sequence was just mean...when is Kakashi REALLY going to come into this fic? Same goes for Sasuke.

I really thought Kakashi had done such a thing!!!
but then I remembered something about KAkaSasu
so that couldn't happen if he was dead
well done though
I really thought it was real
I'm usually a SasuNaru fan
but this is quite good
so please keep it up
good work!