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for Sand and Wind

by FlameArchanist

person a fan
schedule November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
post the teachers email address!
person Toki Mirage
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So glad yo updated. ^^ Update again soon? Kudasai? *sniff* T-T *puppy dog eyes*
person confused,maybe stupid
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I do not understand what exactly happened
person lleb0929
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is interesting to read i like it. update soon
person Spitfire666
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! YOU UPDATED! ^_^! Poor Temari! I want Gaara to MURDER Sasuke, the stupid horny Uchiha bastard! *rants* DIE DIE DIE!!! Anyway, Gaara was...so...sweet...;_; heh heh, bet he tasted sweet too, eh Temari? Ha ha, that was pretty kinky and BOLD of her, doing that to him.

I'm dying to know what's going through Gaara's head right now. I can't blame you for your delay in posting this chapter, though. I've been busy as hell, trying to just keep UP with school. But I really, REALLY liked this chapter, and I pray that you update soon!

(P.S. KILL SASUKE!!! >_<)
person Spitfire666
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O_O Dude, what's up? I'm freaked out about your lack of updates! Is it writer's block? Lack of ideas? E-mail me if you want and maybe I can help you out. Since there are basically only three other Gaara/Temari fics in existance, most of which aren't great or involve rape, (which I HATE) I'm really hoping you continue this, since it's definitely the best one.

*sigh* As soon as I get my own computer, I'll start writing some Gaara/Temari. I'm pretty tired of seeing yaoi in EVERYTHING. But anyway, I REALLY hope you continue this soon. Good luck!
person Spitfire666
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! 4 hours of biology homework later, I find that you updated! OOH! Bastard Sasuke! KILL HIM GAARA! Damn it, that was an evil cliffhanger! Run away Temari! *relishes in the thought of Gaara mangling Sasuke* I love your descriptions in here, and I can't wait to read the descriptions of Gaara kicking Sasuke's ass all over the place!

Great job so far!
person WaterBookLover
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
SasukeTemari? o_0 I never considered that coupling as a good one... But now that I think about it.... I think you would do a good job writing it! Can the next fic you write be SasukeTemari?
person Janice
schedule September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far keep up the good work!!!
person DarkFeenix
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a very good fic :) best gaara/temari I'veI've read so far(don't get to cocky, I haven't read many fics about these 2 ;)) You write well and your update times are good. Also your descriptions are right on the mark which, IMO is the hardest part... I'll be waiting for future chapters :)