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for love will conquer pain

by binneybaby

person kilmorden
schedule September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh man - this was great! It's so sweet, but not sacchrine, and although Gaara's definately different, you explained it with good logic so that it doesn't seem too OOC. Great job! Looking forward to more of this ^_^
person ronin101
schedule September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like you fic! ^_^ At first I rolled my eyes at how OOC Gaara was and how mature Naruto acted, thinking that it would cheesey, but then you justified everything! Like how long it had been--so of course there would be some behavior changes in both, psychologically why Gaara would do the occ things he was. That was great and best of all, it made total sense! I am fine reading fics when characters aren't IN character, but usually no one justifies how they have rearranged their mannerisms or psychology. >_< I loved all your insight into Gaara, and how he still retains he badass, homicidal tendancies (it just wouldn't be Gaara if he lost them all). I reread the fic later too, and I think you did a great job-how to say?-isolating them. The focus was on their relationship, and other than a few comments in the beginning, it was like they were in their own little world in that apartment. I thought it was a nice touch. Also, how they reacted to one another was very smooth and natural. It would be just like Naruto to space out. ^_^

Alright, I'll stop rambling now. I look forward to the next chapter. (I have you in my favorites!)
~Sara
person Mc-88
schedule September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is really anice fic..... Really cute!!!(^_^) And Gaara's quite ooc but it's nice.... I'm sorta imagining, Shuichi's (Gravitation) personality...Hehehe!!! Cute!!!!(^_^) Update soon, ne!!!!
person Majo-chan
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ho, but that's so sweet. ite ite more, please. :3
person Rai
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is great write more really soon!
person Christine C
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sniffle!* That was so sweet!

This is why I love Gaara/Nar-> t-> the potential for totally "sweetness" is incredible!

I can't wait for more!

^_^
person hyperactivator
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cute!

I'm getting a tooth ache!

More soon I beseech thee!
person JadeTiger
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh so cute!! I wana see more!
person gaze
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gaara is adorable here. Nice work.
person lain
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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