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for All Those Little Things

by lynnxlady

schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Rar! I liked this a lot... Mostly because I love JirTsu, but also because it was remarkably well done. I enjoyed the referances to Tsunades previous relationship, and how much it preyed on her mind, even with Jiraiya. Bravo!
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Wonderful story.
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was...hands down, *the* best JiraTsu story out there. I love your writing style, it really keeps a reader's interest, and it just fits these two. The last line is simple and touching. 10/10.
person Anon
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally,someone thought of this pairing. Good one!
person TripleS
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Actually, this was the first TsunadeXJiraiya adult fic I've read, and I loved it! Great sex!
person Anon
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You need to write more.

This is too good to do as a one shot. :)
person Yumi
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a beautifully written smut story! i really loved it, you should write more!
person Sailor Comet
schedule December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was hot. (Well, Jiraiya is already hot, but the writing was definitely _very nice_.)

Beyond that, I like that he stayed in the morning.

~Sam
person RFEC43
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Porn WITH plot- which is actually the best kind. You have the characters down pat. Great great job- I love the pairing. It's hot!
person kilmorden
schedule September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was great. Can't think of a single damned 'constructive criticism'. Well written and entertaining, J & T seemed very much in character, the whole story was entirely believeable - it was a great read :)