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for A Scrap of Humanity

by Iori

person silverfox
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT A GREAT START IT WAS AMAZING I WAS SO INTO THE STORY YOU ARE A GOOD WRITER AND HOPE YOU CONTINUE
WRITNG GREAT STORIES LIKE THIS ONE.

I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS WITH ITACHI& NARUTO IN THE NEXT CHAPTERS.

SO UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPTER BYE BYE!!!
person Saki
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*waves* Schizo!!*hugs* I love how it's actually and I still wanna read more of ItaxNaru.^^ Oh! And still Sasuke is getting more jealous by the minute since he keeps thinking about what Itachi is doing and how come he's taking Naru away from him.lol Though it's very sweet how Itachi and Naruto's relationship is becoming more serious. *thinks* But I wonder who will eventually win Naruto's heart in the end because Naruto's of course in the middle of the brothers and it's like a tug of war on who will have Naruto as their own lover. Anyways, Itachi and Sasuke better do their best because Naruto's heart isn't easy to win over lol, though Itachi and Naruto have become more close than ever. Ne? Sasuke I wonder what will you do to have Naruto goto you....o.o

"It's war between us on who will have Naruto's heart!"-a little quote from Sasuke x.x;
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!
person choas
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice story update
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Coolsa.
person Katana-kun
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey!!!!!!!

(I'm using my older bro's name so don't get freaked out if this sounds girlish)
I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I wish you would've put more to this because this fic is addictive!
Your idea is original and new. It's just what ItachixNaruto needed!!

I hope Tachi and Naru can be together soon.... Sasuke just needs to get over it and get a B.O.B (battery opperated boyfirend!)

Good luck and if you ever need an idea or two just e-mail me.
person Jei
schedule November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another chapter! *loves* This one was great. I really like how you're making it more complicated with Sasuke breaking his facade and reaching out to Naruto, and I think the way Itachi is sort of leading Naruto on is perfectly in his character...we so don't see enough of him, do we?

Jei
person TenshiKaitou
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
whoa whoa, cool chappie! and for Itachi to reveal so much emotion, well it is a little strange at first but...UPDATE SOON!
person Pai (=^_^=)
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!! that was so GOOD!! aawwww my itachi so hot.........uh sorry yeah like i was saying i love it ONEGAI UPDATE SOON!!
person Fuujin
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
-.Enjoys.- =x; This was really good. I REALLY hope you continue. Not alot of ItaNaru fics. Good ones anyways.