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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PURE GOLD. Homawgawd. That was just *fan fan* dude...it was hot. THE END. You win.
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol, man i loved this. Keep up the good work.
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"We never made it to the coffee shop" Ha! I like it. Not too cliched, I like the sense of realism.(Morning Breath is really a bitch) I like the way you've portrayed the 1st person POV. Only some authors can really nail 1st person POV and I think you're one of them. (Not to mention the way the lemon was hot, even though I find it hard to write like that)
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't know exactly what to say except that was so freaking hot *dies*
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April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke is -such- a horny bastard! *grins* He was gorgeous as you portrayed him: wanton and desperate. Naruto’s introspection was just guh… The way he reacted to Sasuke and the changing friendship, amazing. This is absolutely one of the hottest boysmut I’ve ever read. The electricity portrayed between the two of them is delicious and your writing style is envious. I look forward to more great one-shots like this *wide innocent smile*
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! Was that hot or what? Having sex while Naruto's on the phone was definitely my fave scene here. Heee... great work as usual. I almost drooled on the keyboard.
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good job on this story! Do us all a favore and continue it or start another one!
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February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man.... That was so awesome ;-; I really hope this story continues... Its really good and I just love how Their relationship suddenly just sparked out of nowhere >D
Well, what can I say. I'm a whore for SasuNaru fics and you are by far my favorite author :3 <3
Well, what can I say. I'm a whore for SasuNaru fics and you are by far my favorite author :3 <3
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January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woot! naruto is so evil...doing it while talking to ino. heh. but to admit the truth, i like this chappie the best. continue ne?
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December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
huhrah for sasuke and naruto pairings. i'm happy they never got to meet ino's friend. they need each other more than they need to meet ino's friend.