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for Evolution

by BeccaAmon

person MultifacetedTune
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!!! ^__~ Very cute, and wonderfully written -- keep up the good work!!!
person Anon
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this story kicked ass!!!
i loved it
hope you ingenious brain pops out more soon
person demonesse
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
amazing as usual. your writing is always up to high standards. i really enjoyed reading evolution, wasn't expecting a second chapter, so was pleasantly surprised (and then some)

really tasteful, but hot, the way you write love scenes.
person KyuTails
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Those two go at it like rabbits...Geezus...not that it's a bad thing...^_^

Anyway, I love your writing. One: I think it's dirty *perverted laugh* and of great quality. Which I think would be hard to mix up. G'Job!
person MiyaJadecube
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I knew I recognized your penname...you write some of the most realistic Naruto fanfiction out there. No lie. Your boy to boy interation has this spark...this masculine feel to it that hits the right spot every time for me. I first fell in love with your Spiral Falling, so now I get to treat myself to your other yummy works. To repeat what others have said, & contradict any negative remarks someone might dare...~_^...you are an awesome writer, keep up this great work! ~Bows~ MiyaJadecube
person ku
schedule December 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ahhh.. I love it ^^
person Emina
schedule December 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The ending was so beautifully written, so much emotion, I loved it!

I love this fanfic. I'm diffentely telling about this one to my friends.

Major Kudos to you

-Emina
person kieshar
schedule December 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a good fic. I like how you are protraying Susake and his attraction and Naruto's acceptence. I look forward to the next updates.
person Emina
schedule December 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I went to your profile here because your sn looked VERY familiar and was like :

'No way... no FUCKING way...'

Your wrote Spiral Falling as well!!

I absolutely love that fanfic, and you are BY FAR the best writers of SasuNaru AU fanfiction out here, I confindently assure you ^^

That's it, I'm stalking you from now on...

lol

-

Much fanlove from Emina
person turtledonkey27
schedule December 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok, chapter one was excellent, but this was even better! i'm so glad you decided to make a second part, and that they're fine about it. excellent smut! 5 stars!