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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was fantastic need to run your story thou a sell check thou i houp you plan to update soon
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice Story
Update More PLZ
Update More PLZ
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i hope you update soon i love your story good luck
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i hope u update again. if its naruankokurenai and perhaps even more grls it would be so awsome
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The whole fisting the anal thing bugged me out, but since it was a dream sequence its like .. *shrugs* Damn.. where are you?! Update!!!
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I was lost on the first chapter but the second one was much more clear. More Lemons in the next chapter please
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Where are you? I wanna read Naruto screwing Haku's mom's brains out.
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December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Though it was obvious to tell who was talking simply because the manner of speech between the two are vastly different, doesnt mean you shouldn't use "%%". Well, it looks really interesting so far. Next chappie wipee!
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December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Jeez..If only my lil' daydreams can get that real. Update soon. The plot still seems really cool too. Haku is a girl in this story? Great. Cause that whole thing about him being a guy was really weird. Kishimoto even gave him friggen girly legs. Da hells with that? Update soon.
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December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
... You really really really need a proofreader for this. This story is unreadable in it's current context, half the worlds you have to guess at what they're supposed to be... make sure you read your own works after running them through the spell checker