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November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good lemon... I want more though...
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October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I look forward to more.
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October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Um, it had an interesting plot so far but, could you start usiing these "Blah" ? I had a real hard time following this, hell at one point you used the dash thingy "--" and that cleared it up a bit. But you didnt..so..Please?
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October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THis chapter was way better! Maybe it was cause' there wasnt much talking..But when when there were it was nice and easy to follow. Knew exactly whos talking. ANd goodness, he's been training for 3 millas? as? How much power would he have now? Goodn wit with that much time he could probably rival (if not stronger) the powers in the Dragonball Z world.
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October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Those lyrics at the end are wrong, these are the correct ones.
Not dead which eternal lie
Stranger eons, death may die
Not dead which eternal lie
Stranger eons, death may die
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October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Those lyrics at the end are wrong, these are the correct ones.
Not dead which eternal Str Stranger eons, death may die
Not dead which eternal Str Stranger eons, death may die
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October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Um... could you quotation marks... I got lost in the story... But from what I read I liked it.
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October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice. I hope the new chapter will be there soon. You could make it a naru/hina , It would be nice. And the chapters longer ok$