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can't wait for next ch. awsome start

awsome for the first chap. i love it!!

O.Oawesome reminds me of my life.

heyy!! this is a good ficcie! hope to see it being updated soon! =]=]
anyways, i'm just curious..
is this gonna be a sasunaru or narugaraa?

hm...dis AU is pretty well-written. write more, and soon!

great fic! update soon!!

This is a really great idea for a story! But I think it could be much better if you payed more attention to grammar and punctuation, and if you kind of slowed down. The story moved really fast, and it was kind of hard to get used to. Personally, I think you should spend more time on Sasuke and Naruto's relationship. All of a sudden it goes from being in class to failed sex (I'm guessing, I couldn't figure it out) to Naruto seeing Gaara. Maybe if you left Sasuke in the picture for longer, it would help give your characters more depth. They seem rushed.

But whatever... that's just me... and my brain's kind of scattered right now, so if any of that made sense... good... if not, oh well...

Really, it's a great idea for a storyline. It was really original. Just spend more time worrying about details and characterization... don't let a great story idea make you forget the little things that bring stories to life.

Peace, Omi

Uwaaah I loved the way you portray Gaara in this ficcy. Mrrr. ^___^

Great work so far I would love to see more! :D

just wanted to say loving it and can't wait for the next chapter to come!

yo!! nice story, actually, that's a really promising story, I'm already in love with it and curious what happens next so you better update then^^