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Update please. I want to see naruto put sasuke in his place and sakura staying by narutos side

Came across this and it was such an amazing read! Then I found out it was unfinished.....please continue writing this! So many years have passed already, don't let this great story of yours go unfinished. Good job btw, lemonsssss

Omg, I just realised that even after 10 years since this story has been posted, I read it and you still haven't updated the 4th chapter, wow.

nice story, and for the record, i hate Sasuke too.

now i think that you could pick things up a bit more, it is kind of dragging out and you need to actually hint more in who it is thats talking, i didnt notice it changed after Sasuke's side was done.

i really hope that you kill the bastard, im going to in my story that i will be posting in the next few days or so.

make it bloody, make it painful, make him dead.

good story.

I have one request for you last chapeter, just one thing....Have Naruto beat the living sh*t out of Sasuke. Please!!!!!!!!!!!!

I hadn't read this fic in a while, but insomnia leads to strange places, just thought I'd let you know, this is one of my two favorite fics of all time, centered around my favorite pairing. You capture both of their personalities, and you also portray Sasuke in a realistic manner. Thank you for the story. -Casa P.S. Sasuke needs to die, in a fire. Words cannot express how much I hate that stupid kid, even in the established Manga.

Just finished chapter one and although I have to say that angst really isnt my forte, and I do try to avoid stumbling across it, I have to admit that this fic is great... so far. There arent anywhere near enough good NaruSaku out there and although this one is a bit too dark for my taste, I'll read on hoping for a rosy ending =3

And I hear ya! Hate all Uchiha! *shudders* Anyone who knows me knows, just like your friends I'm sure, exactly how much I hate that born bastard Assuke. It's even written in my profile, my hatred for him. May he end up neautered, forced to watch his balls being cooked like Coq au Vin and forcefed them with the silverspoon he has carried shoved up his useless butt. Amen.

Going on chapter two...

Yes, he used his sharingan on all those honestly pitiful fangirls that can only see his emo 'feel sorry for me'-side and not the serious psycosis and all other kinds of mental flaws that he has *rolls her eyes* I dont know what I feel is more pathetic, him or the obsessed fans.

And about their silly excuse about him having gone through a rough time and having the 'right' to behave like an A-classed asshole? It's like you say, there was another kid in Konoha, one that had it damn many times worse I might add, that turned out to be the one thing that everybody else needed. I'm a damn good example myself actually -_-" My early childhood is like from some horrormovie, honestly. We're talking rapes and abuse here, and I figure you can see by the style I use when I review your story, that I aint any suicidal emo-brat walking around feeling sorry for myself. (Read my fic 'You Sexy Thing' and you'll find out that I have a rather wicked sense of humor XD)

But I'm getting off topic here...

About the chapter, tender and sweet, just the way I like it. There are some minor places where your sentencing might be a little difficult to understand, because of how you formed it, but apart from that... this chapter was great. All I do know is rub my hands and hope for a great Assuke-beating á la Naruto-style. It's the least he deserves...

P.S. Sorry for my spammage >_<"

So... chapter three...

Reaction at the end of the chapter...... -> GAAAH!! FINISH!! You have to write the ending!! (-_-" I'm seriously seeing where my own ticked off fans come from now... that's not a good insight, I tell you...)

So... being the rather calm person that I am, I will ask you to please update this whenever your life outside of fanfiction lets you sit down and write. This was an excellent read. Thank you.

i wont hate you IF YOU FINIGH THE STORY!!! please update!!!!!