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for The One I Still Loved...

by Legacy

person Demise
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice.

I thought all hell would break out this chapter , considering the end off chapter 2, but i was pleasentry suprised.

Great job!
person NarutonerdHPfreak
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOh, good story, I still like Sauske, sorry, but I love the idea of Sakura and Naruto!! Awesome fic!
person Nellysan
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your writing style changed and I'm sorry to say, it's worse. The present tense just doesn't work. It's really short too which dissappointed me but anyway, I like everything. Keep writing
person dasdeke
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice job man. You've left us want more! You're keeping us hanging! Speaking of hanging, I just had to have a bit of mean glee to the "Sasuke Vs Naruto" comments. You know what ones I'm talking about! Very well written! I just hope everything works out in the end...but then again this is "your" so you need to tell it how "you" envision it! Great job and keep it up!
person John
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to agree with you on your opinion of sasuke, he is a whiny lil kid that..I'm stoping myself because I know I won't stop anytime soon. Anyways awsome story, and please finish soon. There aren't enough saku/naru, and the ones there are either aren't good or aren't finished, so give us both. Please :P
person JAMES
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE
person Kay-san
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Alright, let's get that last chapter up! Chop, chop!

Seriously, love the fic. I'm usually not a big Sakura/Naruto supporter since I'm into the KakaSaku and Gaasaku stuff, but this is a really great story! And while I don't really HATE Sasuke, I don't like him either. So, I'm eagerly awaiting the last bit! Hugs & Kisses!

(Please ignore it if the review makes no sense. Tired Kay-san rambles. *sheepish smile*)
person DasDeke
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was an excellent story. I am in agreement; I'm not a fan of the Uchiha either. I find it very hard not to Sasuke bash either when talking Naruto, or writing Naruto. This story is quite good, and I could see it happening if Sakura ever did go for Sasuke (lets prey she doesn't). I gave that Fic "Something or Other: First and Only" a good read too, and it very good, so I checked up on there others, good as well, thank you for pointing Geno out! Anyway keep up the work; I can't wait to see an update!!
person Demise
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it...such a nice flow in the story , describing feeling so well....u tell the little things so good.

I have to admit that Sasuke isent my favorit character , and well to be thruthfull Sakura kinda irks me sometimes to , the way she treated Naruto , random beatings and stuff....i understand it was for comical relif , but still.

But the way it's going it looks kinda shes starting to warm up to him a bit , but her character is like Naruto...stubborn as hell , so i doubt she will ever change her love from Sasuke to Naruto.

But anyway , i really really liked you'r story , when this is finished i will definatley come back regularly to see if u have made new ones.
person Revan
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know who had a worse life that Sasuke? Gaara, but oh wait, Gaara got over it.....

Sasuke ftl