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for The One I Still Loved...

by Legacy

person Juno
schedule November 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent stuff.
person Kyle
schedule November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is really good. I like it. You hit a soft spot for me. And that's saying something, because I hardly ever like most of the fanfiction I read.

Please continue this. I'd really like to see this come to a conclusion.
person someone
schedule November 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good story, please continue and if you want be more descriptive ^_^
person Leafe-chan
schedule November 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woha. Good chapter! love,love,love the pairing.
I completely agree that Naruto should get Sakura *grins*
Sakura is my fav. character from Naruto. And I like Naruto too, he's just too goofy -not- to like.
Sasuke...eh....dunno about him, don't really have an opinion there.

Update soon, more power to Naru/Saku stories!
( and more het.sex.pairings in general :D )

~L~
person wrathchylde
schedule November 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woot!! I'm glad it got updated. This is one of my fav naruto stories.
person dark mystik
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
heheheh, i hate sasuke too!!! yay yay!! great fic btw!!
person Katzztar
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for portraying abuse by a loved one in a real light. Most of the time, such fics just graze the surface and never go deep into how it affects the abused one.
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes! More Naru/Saku! It's so nice to see another het pairing that *doesn't* involve Sasuke. Thank you so much for the NaruSaku love, it was much appreciated. This was a wonderful little story, and the first person pov was very well done. I love the Uber Ninja shirt, that was an awesome little quirk, and I can't wait to see the next chapter! X3
person kayoko
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i usually don't read this pairing, but i got through the whole chapter and want more

(i think your fic is reaaallly good)

everything you said about sasuke filling with hatred made a lot of sense ..it'd be neat to see what exactly sasuke did to sakura thru some flashbacks..(i mean..you mentioned they were wounds..but...did sasuke chidori sakura or something? i can't imagine him using a whip[oops..that's my kinky side talking =P]...maybe just random objects thrown at her? i mean..if you throw something hard enough..i guess you can puncture skin...i can't imagine him using ninja weapons on sakura..i mean..what a waste -___-;;; he'd only have to clean them up later on..*sighs* sorry, i'm rambli)
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man....i want a tshirt that says "uber ninja"....i should start making my own t-shirts...that'd be so kewl..*nods*

hm....i love how sweet naru-chan is..*nods*nods*...can't waitsee see sasuke vs naruto XD fight!~

thank you for writing such a great fic ^_^
person lc
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't share your hatred for Sasuke, but this was a good story/lemon :)