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October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man...all I have to say is keep it up. I might not hate Sasuke completely, but I feel thatre hre has to be more Naruto/Sakura pairings! That and Naruto/Hinata are two categories that are lacking in things to read...so hurry up and write the next parts of this series, and make sure we get to see Naruto fight Sasuke over Sakura.
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October 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was a bit hesitant to read this but now i'm glad i did, this one is REALLY good... and i agree, there aren't enough fics like these, about 9/10 of all fics here are Yaoi... i wonder why. Oh well, can't wait for the next chapter, keep this up!
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October 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was referred to this by a fellow NaruSaku fan, and I must say this is a good start. ^_^ It's so nice to see a new adult NaruSaku story!
I thought Sakura was a little quick (even though I know she has softening feelings for Naruto in the manga) but I can understand that emotions were running high, and she needed Naruto there for her - just as he has always been. The Naruto POV was excellent. ^_^
I'll be keeping an eye on your writing. ^_^
I thought Sakura was a little quick (even though I know she has softening feelings for Naruto in the manga) but I can understand that emotions were running high, and she needed Naruto there for her - just as he has always been. The Naruto POV was excellent. ^_^
I'll be keeping an eye on your writing. ^_^
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October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it was great i would love a sequal sasuke beating etc i also would like to say there are probaly 3 naruto sakura lemons if not 2 yours being one of them it was a great story.
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October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh...that was WONDERFUL!! Heh. I hate Sasuke too. He's a prick. Naruto and Sakura are probably my favorite couple next to Shika/Ino ^_^ Anyway, wonderful work! Please, WRITE MORE!!!!
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October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
huwway! i'm a Naruto x Sakura junkie, and yes! there needs to be more fics between them. :3 i find the pairings so much more interesting than lame sasuke x sakura anyway. Sakura and Naruto are so much alike too. their expressions alone during the beginning of the manga are proof of that. love this coupling <3
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October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
huwway! i'm a Naruto x Sakura junkie, and yes! there needs to be more fics between them. :3 i find the pairings so much more interesting than lame sasuke x sakura anyway. Sakura and Naruto are so much alike too. their expressions alone during the beginning of the manga are proof of that. love this coupling <3
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October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
huwway! i'm a Naruto x Sakura junkie, and yes! there needs to be more fics between them. :3 i find the pairings so much more interesting than lame sasuke x sakura anyway. Sakura and Naruto are so much alike too. their expressions alone during the beginning of the manga are proof of that. love this coupling <3
don't think it posted the first time
don't think it posted the first time
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October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hate sasuke too!
Good job.
Good job.
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October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh so kewl waiting for the next part love this too no end and you ain't the only person who loathes tman.man. So happy to finally read one of these. this was such a good fic.