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for Tangle

by amuckgirl

person LadyPiro
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really great! Please continue??
person itachi
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was really good but u needed a bit more information
person Holy
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy. that was......beautiful. and that's the first word I've ever used that word. seriously.
person aoshi4misao
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Short and Sweet. Great job, you are very talented, and that was nice job with the strange point of view. There are not enough fics of these three out there, but yours is one of the best. Woohoo, Team seven sexiness. :) Great job keep up the good work.
person maimo
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was good i dont really enjoy sakura with either sasuke or naruto but the way you wrote it made it both belivable and cute i dont know just fits 7 team dinamics.
person Nana
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's very sweet! Really, I got the feeling I'd like a relationship like theirs after I read it. Domo^^
person campurr
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wished for more detail and eVen hope you will add other episodes as persons they are attracted to get the "time of their life or team 7 learns a thing or three".I THINK THEY ARE UNSTOPPABLE AS A TEAM.IT IS A FINE IDEA.THANK YOU
person KyuTails
schedule November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Y'know, I REALLY like this. I've noticed I have a tendancy to gravitate toward liking Sakura much more in the big sister way in the fiction.

You did a good job! Keep it up!
person sailor comet
schedule November 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aw. awesome little fanfic. I like the 2nd person POV that's sakura. it's also very amusing just how easy it is for her to manipulate them. XD
and kakashi cracks me up too. that's a scene i could definitely see.

~Sam
person Katzztar
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heh, I have to admit, I like the traingles where they all together instead of the triangles there two clash over the third.