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October 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit that I don't normally read fan fics that have females in them because I find girls to squishy and soft, but I also have to admit that this is an amazing fic. I've been in a relationahip for quite sometimes and the partre yre you talk about doing things without thinking about them is perfect. It describes an honest connection perfectly. Keep it up.
~Hawk
~Hawk
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October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. I'm surprised I did, because I typically don't like any Sakura pairing, but I did. Will you continue this story, or is it a one-shot? (You should continue....)
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October 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like muchly. ^__^ Good job.
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October 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This was a very nice surprise. Naruto/Sakura/Sasuke fics are rare, and well written ones are even rarer. And you've managed to supply both in one story, therefore, I applaud you. ^_^
And as for it all being written from 2nd person, Sakura's POV...I liked it. It was a refreshing change of pace from most Naruto fiction.
Well, for that and the fact that you actually had Sakura acting and thinking like Sakura.
Excellent work!
And as for it all being written from 2nd person, Sakura's POV...I liked it. It was a refreshing change of pace from most Naruto fiction.
Well, for that and the fact that you actually had Sakura acting and thinking like Sakura.
Excellent work!