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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
adultfan.nexcess.net/aff/story.php?no=38865 does not exist anymore.
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good, almost like a poem or something. i liked it alot.
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sure!Has lots of promice.You liiiike Itachi.I do too.Thanks
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAMN that was a really mean thing to do making it so short i love ita/naru. hope you make a fic with this pair i would really like to read it, there arn't to many stories with ita/naru which makes me kinda sad/mad but i think you did really well on this.
so if your in the mood and dont mind writing a fic with this couple you should really do it and i'll make sure to R/R!!
WELL UNTIL THE NEXT TIME HOPEFULLY, BYE BYE!!!
so if your in the mood and dont mind writing a fic with this couple you should really do it and i'll make sure to R/R!!
WELL UNTIL THE NEXT TIME HOPEFULLY, BYE BYE!!!
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December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think your writing would be much better if the boys had erotic/emotional/threatening dialouge with one another,more plot to make it,the story more suspencful.That said I'm sure writing is difficult as it is but you have stated,now,time to experiment improve,if you need someone to co-write with I'll be glad to try and help,I'm sure I could learn alot.I would like to thank you.
Chris
Chris
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November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you're right... i liked it. you should write more!
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November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow :holds bloody nose: for a really short ass lemon, that bwas pretty good, sooooooooooooo, is your friend going to do more cool stuff like this again? That would be so cool!^^
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October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey say your friend she is very good!! It's totaly Awesome, short but AWESOME!!! She must not let herself down like that!!^^
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October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good drabble, I'm glad you posted it. Perhaps with encouragement she'd take a stab at writing a fic, or ficlet hmm?
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October 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! T~chan I love it write me more smut!!! ^_~